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Abolish Selfish Dreams
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part 2


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I gaze into the mirror..
All I see is me..
It doesn't really matter..
I am not who I seem to be..
My eyes to me look hollow..
My skin has lost its glow..
My face looks somehow sunken..
I have lost myself..
I know.
No one is happy with who I am..
They all want me to be,.
As I seem...
To live up to all expectations..
To abolish selfish dreams..
They don't feel the guilt I have..
They don't know how hard I try..
They only see what they want..
They only see the lie..
And even when I scream the truth..
I AM DOING THE BEST THAT I CAN!!
It doesn't seem to be heard..
Failure has no friends..
If only I could change..
Like a mystic magic dream..
Keep everything inside of me...
To abolish selfish dreams..



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 Reviews of "Abolish Selfish Dreams"
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
i gaze into your heart and all i see is perfection.
josie

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Deep write with intresting perceptions .. J & J

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
You really nailed this one. Your words are painful.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
I happy with who you are because yoou a good friend and awesome writer and so you should be happy nice job on this peom

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Superb!!!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
Erica, wonderful poem. The best you can should be good enough for anyone.

Reviewed by ken Oliver
Reviewed on March 19, 2003
great write J.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
everybody is selfish... don't worry. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
You excel in your work Erica very creative so give yourself applause;-)Bravo!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
be your creative self... the truth of your inner dreams will not abandon or diminish you...

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
I still like this one, and it matched its mate so well. Well done, my friend!

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
May you have sweet dreams Erica.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
Dear Erica, No need to worry. I am your friend. You are a fantastic writer.:)


tony

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
you are loved beyond measure...unique and one of a kind...perhaps choosing a life with much suffering...but that only allows you to be you!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2003
I don't know of any dreams that are selfish. More like self-ful.
Good poem, expressed with angst.
~E


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