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Come I hug you Brother
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Feelings of a hurt friend. A good friend forgives and forgets

You are unreliable
You are a sunflower
You are a face shifter
You change in a minute
You are a chameleon
You take many colors
I thought you were
the light of truth
But unfortunately
You are a shadow of doubt
Get lost you wicked man
I no more trust you
And no more a friend of yours
But but but b....
But sorry, I have been too much
Devil took in charge of me
Please forgive me my brother
In God's love,let'smake peace
Please for give me brother
Come I hug you brother 

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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Too many people like this in the world. And it seems that we always come away a little wiser, and a little stronger, but sometimes a little less from the experience.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
this describes perfectly the feelings of betrayal that one might have and then also the sublime forgiveness that so few of us are able to find. Like Eileen, I'm keeping this.

Susan

Reviewed on August 4, 2006
I felt sad about this poem and made some changes on it........ at least to end it with peace instead of war. So I added the last few lines to show that the hard feelings of the hurt friend have been soothed by angels of love. The devil is gone and peace has dawned upon the mind of the man who felt so bitterly about the behaviour of his friend. Thanks

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Sad, but very well crafted poem! I'm keeping for referrence!;-)
Thank you Abdi Noor!

Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Very sad, Abdi-Noor. But true friends remain true, and I guess the rest, we must often let go.

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Powerful


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