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Green Card Love
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This has happened to a guy who several years back travelled to America. He looked at a girl and she looked him back and the two fell in love. But their love went to the rocks before he was issued with the green card. The girl refused someone to exploit her innocence. But that did not stop him from wandering around to pass his love virus to another girl for the same reasons he had lost the first girl. Too bad.

Wading into a river of infatuation
I blissfully swam in waters of joy
But with the heat of glaring truth
The romantic bonds had been weakened
Green Card Love had then fallen apart
Like the pieces of a broken glass
Its bits lie on the floors of lust

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Reviewed on September 9, 2006
From what I've been told brother Abdi-Noor this is not an uncommon occurrence. Too many desperate girls/women blind to red flags. Something for them to think about. Peace, love, blessings and gratitude for sharing. <Mikii>

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Makes one think to what extent man can go. Victor

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
If the only reason he told her he loved her, was so he could stay in America, then shame on him! If two are in love, truly in love, then a marriage that stands the test of time will give him permanent residency here. I have known women, who for a large sum of money, will marry someone so that they can remain in America, but the marriage must last (I believe the number is) 7 years and Imigration services will come to check on them to make sure that it is a real marriage and not simply a citizenship marriage. I would suggest that he goes to Mexico and jumps the US border, it seems that we are ignoring those people when they come here, now.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mohamed Buraale
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Mr.Abdi-noor your poems always lovely

Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Excellent write, Abdi-noor; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) much love, and continued prayers, your friend/sister in America, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
Your poem and preface show all the different ways humans choose to mess up their lives in order to obtain their desires. It is a sad fact! Well done Abdi Noor!

Reviewed on September 9, 2006
A powerful write, Abdi-Noor; and a thought provoker at that. Well done!

(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
There are sadly many cases of 'Green Card Love' that have gone astray.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
very well written...I especially like the line 'but with the heat of glaring truth'

Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 9, 2006
One night stands foundations are built on sand.


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