Baby Through The head (poem) by Abdi-Noor Haji Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 22, 2004

A beautiful conception...A true and glorious meaning. Enjoyed tremendously!
Antoinette

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

Lol. Intriquing prespective. I think a poem is born not just merely by the head but by heart and soul and is born on paper. A real treat this one is.

Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2004

that was a very easy delivery! Nice job

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2004

This a very unusual concept. But a very good write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

well conceived and nurtured poem ...

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Wow, interesing indeed. Awesome write. Thanks for stopping by.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

mood changes became noticeable.

poignant line..
it's rather amazing how one becomes MOODY whilst one is birthing a poem...well done Abdi...
a unique write indeed...*smile*
Vesna :)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2004

I found myself here reading this awesome poem Abdi...simply brilliant writing...floria

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2004

BRILLIANT work!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Wonderful metaphor! Excellent poem!The birthing process is very close to what a poet goes through. I once did a poem on being pregnant with words and how relieved we are when they are finally born;-)

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

Ah, perfect metaphor for us writers: for, indeed, we birth our poems and prose, then nurture and protect it like a baby; daring anyone to harm it. Grrrr! Excellent, Abdi. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

Well expressed! Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

(((abdinoor)))

and how lovely are your children--birthed through pain

a most intelligent, cleverly penned piece--*BRAVO, dear brother*

a keeper--thank you

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

This one had me going thought provoking so well done.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

(((Abdi-Noor)))

I really like this; this is a very unique perspective on how a poem is birthed! Very well done; truly enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

Most interesting write!