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conundrum of tears - on fire
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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How ever we can be together is
All I ever dreamt about. even
Right up to this very moment when
Aspirations are annihilated by who we are - us
Lost in an never ending search for love
Despite circumstance.

My love, make my dreams come true , for I...

Am always loving you. even through the conundrum of tears
Painted across my sallow, aging
Face, all I ever think of, is you, in
Everything I do, in ever choice I make, from first to
Last, you, are in my thoughts…from
Tears in the morning, to tears in the night; with
Happiness interceding despondent dreams,
Arguments of ying with yang;
Like with dislike;
Earth with fire;
Right with wrong.


Copyright © 2004 Sara Coslett


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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
I can rely to your words so well.
Often feeling the same way. And also my days start with tears - and end with tears.
But we have to find us a way out there, before the flames eat us up.
Good one.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
The ting is, the deer are trying to do the right thing, survive for another season. Et, tu, Sara? Coslett

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Although the deer in the river will still feel the heat from the flames, they have safeguarded themselves to survive. Or at the least they've taken all the action available to them to do so.
Sara, sometimes even when we believe we've done all we can, we have to keep searching for other ways.
Keep searching Sara, for if you quit now...you may have closed the only route to your heart.

Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
This conundrum is unfortunately one faced by many.

Extremely powerful piece and accompanying graphic, Sara.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
I've felt just like that deer, more than once, this is a heart wrenching and very beautiful write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
at least the dear had the sense to stand in the river when the fire is burning all around them ... that's the unifying force ...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
My bet is if he said yes, you would decide it was no. I feel for you, I know how much you hurt. I wish I could just wave my hand and make it all better.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Although very heartbreaking ...still a very beautiful package Sara!!

Love Tinka


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