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Permission
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I sat on the mountainside

while the sun sat on my back.

The valley was dry

except for a narrow creek,

where a herd of sheep

quenched their thirst

and an hungry cougar

rested between them and me.

 

My eyes darted from sheep

to cat… wondering when it

would attack. As a little one

wandered, her mother not aware,

the cat raced until it caught

the lamb by just a hair.

I watched in horror as the poor lamb

raced away. Going faster, faster,

faster than anyone can.

But after a few minutes

the lamb slowed down…

and as the cat pounced

on her back, I saw

the most amazing thing.

 

The lamb turned on her side

and threw her head back.

Without a cry, as if to say:

I offer you my life

so that you may live another day.

 

The cat feasted on the lamb

and thanked her for being his prey.

 

 

© 2008 Sara Coslett


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 Reviews of "Permission"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
I saw more of an allegory here than the story that unfolded...a beautiful analogy because of its sacred simplicity...
He died that we might live.
Cryssa

Reviewed on December 2, 2008
This is exquisitely, powerfully penned, Sara - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 1, 2008
whhhhh? Those opening two lines are amazing, Sara. I watched the scene unfold, and my neck got kinked towards the end there... no matter... nature is beautiful in all of its motions-- horrible, ghastly, but somehow raw and beautiful. Shocking poem. --Charlie

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Perpetuation of one species over another, victory of the
fittest, and, Sara, you give it a deeper meaning that almost
speaks of love. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
An expression of love of sorts in a most realistic way as life must go on,very descriptive...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Sara,
Powerful and deeply touching poem; I felt as though I was on the mountainside with your exquisite storytelling.
Happiness always, Stuart

Reviewed by Michael Spencer (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
You've turned the national geographic channel into entertaining lines, they were as vivid as if I had read them from fiction.

Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Survival is all the matters in the world of the wild. The lamb shows the act of submission and the cat follows nature's command that it survive another day. A difficult poem for an animal lover to read but a very well written one.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
The amazing thing about nature is the food chain and to observe it in the reality of time is something that is rare and in a way pure. OUr ancestors killed and ate game to survive but they also thanked and gave thanks for the animal who nobly gave them substenance. Great write to think about Sara. Well done.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
I would have been horrified too, and such a beautiful way you concluded this nightmare. Its all in the scheme of things, God's plan. Well done with this painful write. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
This is an amazing and interesting poem.I enjoy reading it with a heavy heart.I was completely blown away by the ending.take care

Edwin


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