I saw more of an allegory here than the story that unfolded...a beautiful analogy because of its sacred simplicity...
He died that we might live.
Cryssa
whhhhh? Those opening two lines are amazing, Sara. I watched the scene unfold, and my neck got kinked towards the end there... no matter... nature is beautiful in all of its motions-- horrible, ghastly, but somehow raw and beautiful. Shocking poem. --Charlie
Survival is all the matters in the world of the wild. The lamb shows the act of submission and the cat follows nature's command that it survive another day. A difficult poem for an animal lover to read but a very well written one.
The amazing thing about nature is the food chain and to observe it in the reality of time is something that is rare and in a way pure. OUr ancestors killed and ate game to survive but they also thanked and gave thanks for the animal who nobly gave them substenance. Great write to think about Sara. Well done.
I would have been horrified too, and such a beautiful way you concluded this nightmare. Its all in the scheme of things, God's plan. Well done with this painful write. Love and hugs, Bonnie
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He died that we might live.
Cryssa
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
fittest, and, Sara, you give it a deeper meaning that almost
speaks of love. -gene.
Be always safe,
Karen
Powerful and deeply touching poem; I felt as though I was on the mountainside with your exquisite storytelling.
Happiness always, Stuart
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Edwin