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The Night Hank Gets Laid
by Gene Williamson → (All Poetry by Gene Williamson)
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My friend Hank loves this poem.
I love my friend Hank.

 

Weekend at the Jersey Shore,
me, my wife, a good friend, his wife,
and Hank
with the overactive testosterone,
young movie maker buddy from Queens,
the scene a waterfront saloon
jumping with sounds of the Fifties,
as ageless revelers shuffle and swing
dirty boogie to prancing mummers strut,
me I mostly sip scotch,
laugh occasionally with my wife,
pretending to listen
to my good friend and his wife,
and ogle
blossoming college girls home for the summer.
 
Hank follows his hormones
to the long oval bar,
finds a seat by the most seductive woman
in the room, tonight’s score,
his thought fixed in a toothy smile,
he is seldom wrong,
orders Sauvignon Blanc for two,
charms her
with slightly off-color Jewish wit,
touches his knee to hers.
 
Later hank stands up,
she stands up,
a goddess creature clad in slinky
not so subtle off the shoulder dress
splashed with color and sex,
this mythic huntress
gazing down on Hank from at least six three,
Hank standing five eleven,
consumed
in deep brown eyes
that mirror his own longing,
call it lust,
her laughter the mock of conquest.
 
Hank stops by the table,
announces his golden Olympian,
hint of lavender in her hair,
Homer’s source of joy,
who whispers
in a voice that springs from the sea,
I am a fifth grade teacher down beach.
Silently I recall
my fifth grade teacher
who never plucked her eyebrows.
Hank slaps my shoulder,
winks as he and his goddess of love and beauty,
her playful smile stabbing my mind
with yesterday rapture,
leave to take a little stroll by water’s edge.
 
I order my wife a vodka and soda,
relight my ten dollar cigar,
duck the frowns,
return my latent desires
to the nearly nubile young things dancing around me,
three the equal of my age,
taunting me.
Slowly I sip my scotch,
lost in memory and a few regrets.
 
Next morning at the room,
the rap on the door is Hank,
sleepless bloodsick eyes,
on his face the death grin of a pale Adonis
who just got laid
by Aphrodite.
 
 

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Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Gene: I love this poem, but wouldn't the title be in past tense? Maybe not. As you bring us so vividly in the scene. But something bothered me. You say in the poem that Hank is there with his wife. What about the wife? The wife was ok with his going off with Aphrodite? There are lines I love: follows his hormones; the off rhyme of bar/score. I think you may not need "call it lust," as you are aptly SHOWING and don't need this discursive bit. Same in a few other places. I got a kick out of your remembering your 5th grade teacher who never plucked her brows, but I'm wondering, does a 5th grader notice such things and.... does this add to the poem? though it is funny, and we all ruminate, don't we? To what does yesterday (ss?) rapture refer? Did you have a similar conquest? Sleepless bloodsick eyes, and the pale Adonis image are great. i would end RIGHT THERE (though no one asked me). OBVIOUSLY he scored. Such a great image to end with. Good for Hank who was, yes, both predator and prey. But I'm still wondering -- what about that wife??? Maybe a separate poem? Good Gene, good, you have a way with great phrases, imagery; always capitalize on that. Do men ever stop looking??? i guess it's nature's way that they don't.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
Well! You caught me with the title...and then you held me from beginning to end. You, Sir, are one heck of a story teller!

Reviewed on July 22, 2008
What a great life-story, told in a fine gentleman voice!
Hank and his lucky partner!
This was such delight to read and feel!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings,LOVE and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Shay White
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Once again you have brought me to the brink of voyerism and slowly pushed me over the edge. (Makes me miss my own days of being Aprodite and meeting those worthy of a hunt. Thanks to Hank and you for sharing such a vivid slice of life! ~Shay White

Reviewed on July 17, 2008
You Had Me Goin There For A Bit As I Thought His Woamn Prize Was Not A She-But A He....(secrets like that can be shocking)
I have only looked up to one man in my life, and also looked him in the eye....he is 6'3" tall...
I am 5"11 & 1/2" tall & you see that is without my heels...
There is a shortage of tall men in Indiana :)
I enjoyed your story poem Gene :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
What a story, you my friend are great at telling them too in your unique choice of words "his thought fixed in a toothy smile"
Bravo

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
I see scotch, sipped slowly does a body good? What a creative masterpiece and sheer delight to read....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
This is funny and real and delivered with wit and style and the inevitable tinges of regret.
John

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Seen through your eyes, this tale of youth, beauty, and the current 'inn-crowd' gains a wonderful sheen of amusement tinted with a bit of regret.

Leaves me smiling and oddly glad to be far away from this...thanks,
Gina

Reviewed on July 15, 2008
What a story Gene, felt like a voyeur!! Well penned, realistic and so funny.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Gene, this is a hoot! Gave me a real good laugh.

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
.....this is so peekaboo; living vicariously....a scene purposefully scantily clad. .. . and Hank, i'm not sure if he is the predator or the prey here [knowing us women]...either way, the halfeaten grin in the morning says it all.
and you say more in the raising of your brow and glass than some do in a lifetime. this is glorious and giddy.
ness+

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Ah love...or something like it, ain't it grand!

Good write,
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Sounds like poor Hank fell victim to Aphrodite's magic girdle - too bad the rest of us mortal gals don't have such magic garments to make us irresistible (maybe putting away all the flannel and making a trip to Victoria's Secret might do the trick)!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Another great write Gene, I can see why Hank would love it. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
LOVE it, Gene; the title drew me in, and I am glad I read it!! Very well penned/imaged; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Another poem that resurrects memories from my past. Now I have another poem of my own to write. Everything rang so true, that I found myself laughing several times. It was like I was there having a scotch too and ogling the nubile young girls. As if we ever stop. It’s sort of sad that eventually, that all we do. Thanks for this.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
wow, Hank is Last of the red hot lovers. whatta guy you gotta love him.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Hoho, the things we did when we were young! Richly imaged, you took me there - can see why Hank loves this poem. Score! LOL Well done, Gene.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
What a difference four inches makes - in or out! Roustabouts and Aphrodites and from it all comes The Night Hank Gets Laid...what a title and what a title to bestow. A Full House beats a straight, Gene...

Love,
Sage


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