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The Tally
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The Tally

Sword of war, gripped by the hand
Fierce battle winds....turn all the sand
That tumble down by smallest grain
To tally death .....and human pain

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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
i wonder who is keeping the tally...hmmm...very nice imagery in this piece, i could see it all...and feel it as well...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Reviewed on March 9, 2004
Oh wow..yes very powerful, excellently written!

Reindeer
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
This is so very POWERFUL!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2004
Much said in a few powerful words. Bill
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
and the hand that gripped the sword of war
the winds that howled through sands of straw
that slipped before they tumbled down
will find themselves... with the wind of frown...

Superb, i love this i truly do, to me this is awesome, i'd run amok on these words, i just wish i had the chance to take this where i'd love to take it...i dont know, but i'd get a buzz on the journey...take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Very powerful in a few words...
nice Anita...floria
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
So much said in so few words. Wonderful job my friend!!

Jack
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Superb write Anita! Captured the moment!
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Powerful and profound!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Profound, Anita.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Deep.......very deep Anita!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
hard images Lady A, as if they all are counted, ty al
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Concise and deep!
Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Great depth in few words. Thanks.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Lady A~
Powerful poem.......

Lady Peg
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