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Twelve Hours in a Foxhole
by David Lee Thompson → (All Poetry by David Lee Thompson)
Friday, January 24, 2020    Rated "G" by the Author.
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The setting is Di An, Vietnam, 1965. I知 8,751 miles from home, in a foxhole, and I知 scared.


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 Twelve Hours in a Foxhole

 

I took to my foxhole

Before darkness settled in

To claim the night. 

Friend or not,

My foxhole buddy

Was there with me. 

He was experienced,

And I was glad

Somebody knew the ropes. 

He taught me

To cover myself with my poncho

To light my Pall Mall. 

Then he taught me

To stick the lighted end

Into a pop can to conceal its glow. 

The first couple hours were passed

In whispered silence,

While staring into black, sticky air. 

We exchanged 

Two hours on and two off

For what was left of the night. 

My two wouldn’t end,

And my buddy’s

Was over way too soon. 

Choppers broke the distant silence

With rhythmic, onomatopoeic sounds—

Chuff, chuff, chuff, chuff . . .

And all the while

It spat red tracers

Along our compound’s perimeter,

Keeping Charlie at bay. 

 But the rows of concertina wire,

With claymore mines between,

Made security become reality. 

And through it all,

God allowed me to live

To see the dawning of the next day. 

 

©️Copyright 2020 By David Lee Thompson

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 27, 2020
JUST THINK...YOU WERE ALL THE WAY ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE WORLD...BUT GOD WAS WITH YOU! HE DEFINITELY INTENDED FOR YOU TO REMAIN HERE, DAVID. AND HE HAS NOT CHANGED...IT DOESN'T MATTER WHERE YOU ARE OR WHAT THE CONDITIONS ARE, OUR GOD STILL HAS HIS HANDS ON YOU! HE'S LOVES YOU AND HE'S KEEPING YOU. BE IT BACK IN NAM OR HERE IN 2020, GOD HAS NOT CHANGED! THANKS FOR THE SHARE, SO ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 28, 2020
My first night in Vietnam, also 1965, and I was on the outer perimeter in a tent, with nothing between me and that mountain about 2 miles away that was being bombarded the whole night long. I did not sleep a wink for at least 3 days.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 26, 2020
Never near a foxhole in the Navy & intelligence but I can identify with you from grunts I talked too after they were sent back for medical...lousy memories I get, don't even write about it anymore...-e-

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2020
So good to see you posting again. I can only imagine the horror of being in a foxhole and not knowing whether Charlie with a bayonet might sneak up and literally poke you in that hole before you heard him. And the constant having to sleep two hours and then stay awake two hours certainly would take its toll when done day after day to sleep deprivation.

As you pointed out so well at the end, feeling glad to be alive at the end of each of those nights.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 25, 2020
Gripping account of those 12 hours in a foxhole. Glad you made it home, to many didn't. And thank you for your service.


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