Oh, Tom...you are on a spin! You had me laughing all the way - but there is a message in this, too, methinks. Maybe, laughing is the only way out? Enjoyed.
Outstanding unique composition... Every line in it is bountiful to feed the mind, but I think that stanza sixteen bears a great message:
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"Some Are Venusians,
Get Beauty Out Of Jars,
Others Are Macho-Men,
Who Come From Mars!"
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Thank You for sharing this wise-wonder.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2008
And supposedly we all came out of the same gene pool.
Good rant. But as long as man is on the planet, there will never be peace. Compromise is a dirty word to many.
Deputy Dave Jenkins sets out to find the murderer of the local high school principal, aided by a voice from the grave that is sometimes helpful and sometimes misleading.
"Murder isn't usually this funny."
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Micke
Outstanding unique composition... Every line in it is bountiful to feed the mind, but I think that stanza sixteen bears a great message:
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"Some Are Venusians,
Get Beauty Out Of Jars,
Others Are Macho-Men,
Who Come From Mars!"
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Thank You for sharing this wise-wonder.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Good rant. But as long as man is on the planet, there will never be peace. Compromise is a dirty word to many.
Elizabeth