A Sparrow's Savage Truth (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 6, 2003

very good

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Awesome tribute. This is really well done, Zenith. It touches both on an emotional and spiritual level. It send a thrilling stir through my soul. Masterfully done.

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Another awesome poem!

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Well written!

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Very powerful -- your writing always is.

Carmen

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

If the sparrow's truth could but enlighten us all. Profound write, mi'lady.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Excellent!!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Hi Zenith
This is truely awesome
I think the troops should all come home
We have enough battles here at home...

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Excellent write.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Ooh that hits right to the heart, such a dynamic impact, and such a pity that apathy overules such truth.

Lovely write
Ch'erie

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

So very true...Zenith, this is a direct, gut punch of a poem...very well done.

Reviewed by Victoria Noxon

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Wonderful write in this profound tribute.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

You amaze me in the way you verse in such profoundness

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Zenith, a very intriguing title on a very passionate, intelligent write! Awesome!

Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Eerie, deep piece, Z...Loved the comparison of a sparrow's fragility to the world's. Awesome!

Jules :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Thanks for sharing this woderful piece Zen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

A gripping poem Z~ no matter what side we come down on I think we all hate war.God bless all who have to fight in it!

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Well said ...
across sad mystic skies
history lives and dies...
unknown, who will survive
as sparrows speak
savage truth...

Sharron

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Having lived through one, much blood was spilled and for what end.
Thanks for your review.
Grabbing poem

George

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Wonderful tribute to the brave :-)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Zenith, very profound write indeed. One that makes the heart stop and the mind reach for a place of solitude. Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Zenith, this is an awesome poem! Thanks for sharing this.