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Gonna Sleep Till I Wake!
by Jackie S Brooks → (All Poetry by Jackie S Brooks)
  
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NO - I hadn't been drinking!!


Gonna Sleep Till I Wake!



Woke up this morning

Sort of fell out of bed

lurched ‘cross the room

And the wall banged my head!

Everythings’ wrong

And nuthin’ ain’t right

Got a cramp in my leg

And my foots’ gone to sleep

Daren’t try the stairs

Can’t see worth a darn

With eyelids that feel

As heavy as lead.

My brain is in fog

A cotton wool cloud

Thank heaven the bathroom

Ain’t moved since last night.

I’m off back to bed now

Gonna sleep till I wake

And hope that my world

Will soon be put right.

ZZZzzz

ROOSTER:

shut uppa your beak!



Jackie S Brooks ©
11 August 2003


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 Reviews of "Gonna Sleep Till I Wake!"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
There are some days its best to sleep to the next one :-) Wonderful write.

Reviewed on August 11, 2003
"Thank heaven the bathroom
Ain’t moved since last night..."

LOL!!!! Oh, Jackie, I NEEDED this laugh today! Bless you!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
whimsical write delightful to read!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
This was adorable! I laughed all the way through it! Not at your misery,,just the fact that I now know I'm not the only one that does this!!!!! lol ~SH~

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Oh I know just what you mean! I had to sleep with the window shut last night....yea in this heat too, as the flippen magpies start squabling at 4am, then the frogs and toads start ranting and raving in my pond and if that isnt enough a blackbird has adopted me and sings the same tone over and over again on my window sill.........dont you love nature..heheheh
Great comical write Jackie.....had visions of you stumbling around the bedroom. NOW GET UP YOU LAZY BONES..LOL

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
LOL...Thanks for the giggle...cute write...


Trixie :)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
LOL...this is GREAT GREAT GREAT...loved it and wish I could sleep till I wake!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
P.S. If that roosters not to old we can pluck him then cook him! ;O)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Me too!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Yes. I am having that sort of Monday also. Fun write.

Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Must be Monday...that sounds like my mornings LOL

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Perfect for a Monday morning.
Can't wait for Friday.
John

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on August 11, 2003
Just make sure you oats and honey handy!
Cheers
Allain


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