Snow Ball Fight (Acrostic) (poem) by Jackie S Brooks on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

LOL
reminds me of my own little ones this past winter
my youngest would always try and get me as she got off the bus

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 3, 2004

Nice one, Jackie; so enjoyed this snowball fight! Ahh, those were the days...such fond memories!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

(((jackie)))

*whiff* i ducked :)

but what a creative chilly write!

first stanza, third line, did you mean "ruckus?"

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

nice poem

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on January 30, 2004

Enjoyed reading this..warmer reading than out doing...my kids are loving the snow!!! Best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on January 29, 2004

Enjoyed this much!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

LOL snowball fights are fun :-) Wonderful uplifting write!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Well done very creative
enjoyed much

William

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Pam - I won by default I believe, Jim cheated, he ducked!!!!

Ed - You'd better watch out, remember David and Goliath. My aim is generally very accurate, I usually get them into the left ear!!!!

Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

OK, Jackie. I have my super duper Atlantic shooting sling shot set up - here comes one at ya! (It will be there tomorrow.)

Very nice poem!

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

What a wonderful acrostic poem Jackie! These aren't easy to do but you certainly did a real winner.....wish our snow here was "snowball" type but it's fine and powdery and not wet enough for a decent snowball fight!!! So now I have to know - did you or Jim "win" the fight???????

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

"Snow Ball Fight (Acrostic)" - I enjoy this acrostic! It is a composition if free verse that flows wonderfuly.

Thank You, Sublime Poet, for being a bricklayer in the building of the tower of Grace and wonders!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Most excellently written Jackie!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Wonderful and inspiring AND descriptive. Good to see you posting again. It's been awhile.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 28, 2004

Excellent Jackie. We in the North East have plenty of ammunition we would be glad to get rid of