pteioc befakasrt (for Joseph*’s “scrambled” challenge) (poem) by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations on AuthorsDen

pteioc befakasrt (for Joseph*’s “scrambled” challenge)
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(the real challenge was to try and scramble the words with the spell-checker continuously correcting them, LOL!)
pteioc befakasrt (for Joseph’s “scrambled” challenge) in utenburtale tioruml is tihs pteioc cehf, eggs of cateroin witanig to be borekn, the pgae silzinzg and msue and mnid siltl angurig on waht I suhlod sbarlmce tiehr misgnus wtih. srroy, my draes, picatneie has jtus mteled and soon it wlil brun – so, hree go melery the ylok and the wtihe of wdros all bateen tehgoter puls a pnhic of slat taht I cna’t aiovd. and a pialn olemet of pteioc itnet, I’m ariafd, wlil be all ylo’ul be gitetnig for befakasrt taody! ... and here is the "unscrambled" version. enjoy! :0) *poetic breakfast (for Joseph’s "scrambled" challenge)** in unutterable turmoil is this poetic chef, eggs of creation waiting to be broken, the page sizzling and muse and mind still arguing on what I should scramble their musings with. sorry, my dears, patience has just melted and soon it will burn – so, here go merely the yolk and the white of words all beaten together plus a pinch of salt that I can’t avoid. and a plain omelet of poetic intent, I’m afraid, will be all you’ll be getting for breakfast today! © 2006 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2006

Alexandra,

Thank You for such a clever and creative response to the challenge!
This "pteioc befakasrt" is just what's needed to get the new day off to a wonderful beginning.

Savouring every bite,
Joseph

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Alexandra,

You not only met the challenge, you far surpassed it. Clever, clever you! Enjoyed this one.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

LOL!! Perfection! Love it!!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 20, 2006

You are the Queen, Alexandra! A splendid answer to the challenge.
I love the humor too, great last line!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Kewl write, I didn't see the challenge but I get the drift, and I think you mastered it very well.

Felix

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations

should this scrambled thing be too impossible to... huh... eat, soon I'll post the "unscrambled" version right here. in the meantime, however, I challenge you... to enjoy deciphering this "pteioc" dish! LOL!