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To lay or not to… hatch
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(Egg photo by Ciekawedzdjecie... a name as hard to spell as my poetic musings seem to be to hatch, today... LOL! Enjoy, and have a delicious Sunday... scrambled at your pleasure, or truly sunny-side up!)
xoxox


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To lay or not to… hatch

 

And then there were nests of days like that
when embryonic poems stared at one another
and she at them, all suspended in the vagueness
of egg-shaped conditions with hard and yet
frail walls of words, and silence, as thick as
the whites of eggs are, cushioning the yolks
inside.


Still, they were better than those other days
of words screaming to hatch; when all would
try to squeeze through a passage much too tight
throwing at each other fallacies of exclusivity
- again egg-shaped, but of a solidity encasing
mere denial of its own frailty about to crack
and spread glutinous perceptions of sameness
side by side.


Oh, dilemmas of poetic fecundation, of quills
yet to reveal the colours to fly or not to fly, and the
ripe dynamics of the feathers behind and to soar or not 
beyond them…what poems, what birds, if any, were
laid, indeed, to live? There are days like this…
when you, words, seem to be meant, and she, not to
hatch at all; and be simply scrambled, while
fresh, with a pinch of salt, to be eaten by no one but…
… the poet herself, sitting, plate on her lap, by
some unuttered, wistful synonym of window
- and staring at those cacophonic hens the muses
turned into, vacantly pecking at a blank sheet of paper
outside.


(Burp...)

 

© 2007 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®
 
 


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 Reviews of "To lay or not to… hatch"
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on February 8, 2007
Alexandra...this is so wonderfully and cleverly written and a poem with which I can totally identify. I so admire your gift.
xo Taylor

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
This is a great metaphorical poem. I really admire you for such writing. Victor

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
Alexandra, minha Trenginha ...

This is so, SO Clever and so funny! Oh, how I love to devour your words. (Burp...) You always spice things just right. Could I have another helping please?

Your (Burp...) Admirer,
Joseph

Reviewed on February 5, 2007
Alexandra,

Your words are delicious and completely satisfy this reader: the thoughts you boldly season in well prepared ways: yes. May I please have another serving???

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

WELL DONE!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
"Oh, dilemmas of poetic fecundation, of quills
yet to reveal the colours to fly or not to fly"

i just luv how you evaluate the synopsis of the poetic urge to create ...

well done and raw ...

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
The words came out eggzacly right. LOL
Love and {{{{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}},
Leland

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
Alexandra,

Nice reading you again also. I have always loved your exquisite word usage but I must admit sometimes a bit over this old man's head (lol)I seem to like my eggs hard boiled these days with only a pinch of pepper (no salt)

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
I am a hatcher! Therefore I lay...LOL! This was so good, challeging the birth of a poem, to bring it to life or not...I love when nature teases my mind with muse!
Famtastic!
Love and peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 4, 2007
The imagery here is truly captivating, Alexandra. And Ciekawedzdjecie's photo is very captivating, too. Being Polish, I seem to be able to pronounce it very easily, but it is quite a spelling challenge for anyone!


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