OH... DON'T!! This has me rolling, Janet - and oh, so close to home! Fantastic evocation and description, and the narrative is warm and flows like the hooch... you must have really enjoyed writing this one! I certainly enjoyed readin it but... my goodness, think I just need a quick lie down, now... Lay, Lady, Lay... is Bob Dylan still alive?! :)) Knock-out, thank you! LOL Kate xx
What fun! You described the "scene" so well it was just like being there...I would have fit right in too with all that other gray hair!! LOL I too love the last stanza, and endless sunshine sounds mighty good on this gray overcast day. Beautifully done Janet!
I was already laughing at the title alone. If there were a noble prize for titles this could be in with a chance.
The last stanza finished me off. Just the same in Cuba..
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2005
Your never too old to have a good time and you could feel the fun in this write. Thanks for the sharing.
but people were leaving by nine
to tuck themselves in and dream of youth
and a life of endless sunshine.
Aint that the truth...enjoyed this very much...it was a trip into a youthful past...Thanks Janet
Allen
..We did our “people watching”
before the daylight was done.
They were young and “changing latitudes”
in nineteen seventy one.
simply stunning...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
The last stanza finished me off. Just the same in Cuba..
Excellent Write Janet
really enjoyable!!!
peace to you',
Rich Criso Suarez
Joy and Peace,
Eileen
Ron