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Invaded
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Anybody know a good remedy to get rid of yellow jackets, they got into my engine compartment and I went into change my battery, but got stung and had a war, sort of...

Invaded…


 


It just opened up our roof,


Let the sun and rain come in,


The queen we did try to protect,


It attacked with smelly water stuff first,


I cannot read but the queen called it nine oh four,


She asked how many did die in the initial attack, yes the score,


Maybe ten or twenty, but we did get off one shot at the beasts core,


It jumped back, retreated away, came back with stinky liquid and more…


 


Sprayed with water, a heavy stream,


We could not fight back, we could hear our comrades scream,


The battle was a surprise raid,


For now it otherwise did fade,


Maybe it won’t be back, our stinger missile did find its mark,


If it came back again, I am afraid we won’t be able to win,


It is so big, with goggles protecting its eyes, I tell you no lies,


If we could we would send out a bunch of flies,


But they would be destroyed too; yes they would find their demise…


 


The hot sun did drive away this creature; he is hiding in his cold place,


Our missile did strike and left a mark, didn’t kill it, but scared it away,


Or possibly made it more mad, as it is then that it attacked us,


With all that it must have had…


 


So during the evening we rest, and will be ready for his next attack then,


Hopefully he did not find anyway to kill us all off,


For we wanted to come back and vacation here next year or when,


We found the time to do so, why did it attack, we weren’t bothering it,


This happens a lot, those things they call people, humans, they often do offend…


 


      © ed ~ poppywrittED ~ 7/19/04


 


 


   


 


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Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Dear Ed,

"OUCH OUCH OUCH" that must have hurt !!!
hope you are feeling better, next time just
leave them alone.

Warm hugs - and a special one for Rufuz
Elga

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
They were here before us and shall be here long after we are all gone!!!… Flamethrower always seems to work for me Ed!!!… Peace thru running very fast!!!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
Hope you recovered from the invasion. And as for future strategy,
ask Kostro :-)
blessin's dude,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
you should have left them alone, all they wanted was a ride ...

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
Ed, Wow! This must have really "bugged" you to get stung. Talk about adding insult to injury! LOL I'm sure these yellow jackets will one day drive you "buggy" - I know they would me! LOL

The last line is perhaps my favorite - we always assume territory.....but other creatures of nature have a territory too don't they? Liked that perspective alot. :)

~Rose~

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
I was completely surprized at the last line. Great!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 19, 2004
hahahaha must be Andy's little guy who came to visit you from Bugsmobile......hehehe...Julie musta send it to visit mad dog fromm BBB....lol!!

Sorry you got stung...but that was Fun!!

Love Tinky

Reviewed on July 19, 2004
(((o, dear, ed)))

i'm sorry you got stung. mama yellowjacket found a place she thought was safe--i don't know how to get rid of them. your best bet is to call an exterminator and have him answer your questions.

(((HUGS))) and feel better soon, love, karla. :(


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