RE-EXAMINATION OF THE "ID" (ed)
Let painting confuse the ego
And sculpture rarify the elements
No longer can we expand and progress
To reap stories of hankerings
Awful delinquency arises and prospers
Mid usual long shadows of doubt
Tumbling waterfalls of sorrow
Not to be outdone, but reasonable
To assume a headroom of use
Build a region of tarnished samples
Bordering on elapsed time
Those who relinquish their guilt’s
Are automatically absconding with familiarity
How so the ignorant figures
Of elongated tangles of wooded totems
Rising to broad spectrums of anarchy
Bring on the wholesomeness of beauty
Followed by the bestial tolerance
All to often are we misguided in public
Pushed and shoved beyond endurance
But many are taken to lightheadedness
And carried into full bloom in spring
March on, you angels of forgiveness
Let not your sour hearts preserve
A lasting art form of proclivity
Can we all perform indestructibly?
If not, how can we persist?
No cave-ins of the mind can change
The ever-flowing talent of the artist
Nay, it could help nurture a feeling
Whereby the challenge is met head-on
And bothered not by indomitable wholeness
The core of spider webbing
Protects those of great faith
And disputes longevity
But to bring on absolution there’s needed
A shower of muscled strengths
Hardly adequate for average souls
To buy a relative onslaught
Your currency must be that of universal atoms
For ne’er well your dreams consider
Any possibility of breaching the gap
Of poetic license—
Bring up your trains of sorrow
Your wagons of despair
The light is shining forever strong
How will you see it—
Through closed orbs?
(ed)
The depth in your poetry is wonderful and leaves me speechless.
Fine FINE work!
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
~Nikki~