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Goodnight Fair
by Michael D. Schafer → (All Poetry by Michael D. Schafer)
Tuesday, March 26, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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I was asked to write a poem for a possible book about our local county fair, based on the books Goodnight Moon and Goodnight Goodnight Construction Site. This is what I came up with. Any comments would be greatly appreciated so I know if I'm on the right track.

 GOODNIGHT FAIR

 

With the smell of fair food,

Still in the air,

It’s time to say goodnight,

At the Wayne County Fair.

 

The gates are all closed,

And won’t open til dawn,

When the moon fades away,

And the sun turns on.

Goodnight Gates

 

The ferris wheel quit turning.

There aren’t any bumper cars crashing around.

The horses are standing still,

On the merry-go-round.

 

The rides are all quiet,

Shut down for the night.

There’s no sound of laughter,

Or screams of fright.

Goodnight Rides.

 

The Grandstand seats are empty.

The spotlights are out.

The P.A. system was turned off,

After the announcer’s last shout.

Goodnight Grandstand.

 

The exhibits are sleeping with their ribbons,

Of yellows, reds, and blues.

There were so many good entries,

Picking winners was hard to choose.

Goodnight Exhibits

 

Standing sentinel each and every night,

The farm tractors await the break of day,

When farmers will stroll by with oohs and aahs,

And dream of plowing fields and mowing hay.

Goodnight Tractors

 

The vendors are sawing logs,

In their trailors and tents.

The carneys are barking in their sleep

Dreaming of tomorrow’s big events.

Goodnight Vendors

 

And what would be a fair,

Without fair food.

But the wagons are all shuttered,

Unmanned and uncrewed.

 

So goodnight cotton candy.

Goodnight candy apples on a stick.

And you’ll have to wait till tomorrow,

To get snow cones or ice cream to lick.

 

Goodnight elephant ears.

Goodnight funnel cakes.

Goodnight Lerch’s Donuts,

And the best donut anyone makes.

 

Goodnight sausage sandwiches.

And old fashioned lemonade.

Goodnight BBQ pork,

And eating in the shade.

Goodnight Fair Food.

 

The barns are all quiet,

Everyone’s fast asleep.

There’s not a sound to be heard,

Not a mouse or a peep.

 

Goodnight horses,

It’s time to hit the hay.

Goodnight cows,

Tomorrow’s a moo day.

 

Goodnight to our fine feathered friends,

Every chicken and duck.

Tomorrow’s your day to crow,

Cackle, quack, and cluck.

 

Goodnight to all the bunnies,

We love every hare.

May you dream of fields of clover,

That stretch from here to there.

 

Goodnight little piggies,

Tomorrow’s your day to be a ham.

Goodnight to all the sweaters,

Every alpaca and wooly lamb.

 

Goodnight to all the children,

Who wish they could’ve stayed.

And a special goodnight to all the parents,

Whose nerves were getting frayed.

 

The stars are twinkling up in the sky,

And the moon is shining bright.

At the Wayne County Fair,

It’s time to say goodnight.

 

Michael D. Schafer

© March 19, 2019

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Goodnight Fair"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 17, 2019
You certainly have recreated and shared the ambience of your fair, Michael.

There’s no sound of laughter,

Or screams of fright. (I would write, "Or screams of delight" so as to have the same rhythm as the previous verse.)

And the moon is shinning bright. You meant to write "shining."

Nicely done, Michael. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on April 6, 2019
This is wonderful. Definitely the right track. Love it all but this is my favorite

Goodnight to all the bunnies,
We love every hare.
May you dream of fields of clover,
That stretch from here to there.

Reviewed on March 29, 2019
How fun! I enjoyed reading this and loved the way the poem says, "Goodnight..." to each and every aspect and living thing at the fair! Rock on, Michael!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn
Reviewed on March 28, 2019
It's your nice warm style, I just feel it's way too long. It loses power that way, in my opinion.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 27, 2019
You made me want to curl up and go to sleep, along with the Wayne County Fair.

Frankly, this is a most delightful poem that touches at the very heart of almost every county and state fair in the country. You know how to complete an assignment in a way that practically no other but a consummate rhymer can do. I found absolutely nothing that I would change in your poem.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 26, 2019
Could there also be ghosts of the children at play from past fairs & nights, only during the nights when the moon is hidden behind clouds,
voices of those children screaming so loud...great write so far, feel free to use my idea here, as I don't seem to write much anymore, -e-

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 26, 2019
ahh but after such a goodnight I am sure you did return on the morrow.
budd

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 26, 2019
On the right track and then some, in and out and all around the late night fair. As much as I would like to find a fault or make a suggestion, as requested, I cannot, because this really stands on its own, has its own integrity, and read just perfect. I read it aloud to myself, as I would to a child. It doesn't miss a beat. It has some mood and melancholy, as we feel with every good night, but the joy lies in the details of the fair that you summon, from the animals to the food. This is, by far, the very best I have seen from you. Excellent, Michael!


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