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Being In Between
by F William (Bill) Broome → (All Poetry by F William (Bill) Broome)
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The New National Pastime.....

Bein In Between

Online's writing speed
changed the rules
for contemplation
studying intent
coy boy
classy wench
outright flirt
credit report
the net worth
reveals nothing
but we unload
to strangers
more than mother knows
if truth be known
which is rare
playing the game
called online dating
leading perhaps to
travel and meeting
romance and more
marriage yet
betting high stakes
satisfying curiosity
a yearning for the new
overwhelming loneliness
daringly forward and bold
before we're too damned old


2007 F William Broome

  

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Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
Very cleverly written, Bill, whether you've plunged blindfolded into that scene or whether you bare your soul to the unknown through poetry and developed a family of protective friends who often seem more human and sensitive than the ones you see regularly face to face. I know there are bad folk lurking out there, and others, I have discovered, who have the computer knowledge to crawl inside uninvited. I, for one, am still this optimistic soul who tends to trust on a gut level and try and give folks some "credit" and find the beauty in everyone.
Are you ever to old or too young to yearn or seek friendship?
I think the computer evolution has shown us that loneliness is epedemic.
Enjoyed as always,
Love,
Taylor

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
Credit reports? Oh I never thought to ask for that before....could that be what I'm doing wrong? LOL.. just kidding of course! Your piece is straight on in many ways! There are those pluses and minuss but I must share what a friend of mine said once about online dating.. It's like shopping at 'Just 2 Many'..lol
Friend, Myrna
I haven't floated away yet.. but I was beginning to wonder last night.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
So very very true, Bill! Today, on a Guestbook, someone named "anonymous" left a sweet note and signed off "Hugs and Kisses, Becky". All over the MSN and Yahoo groups, it's wall-to-wall "Hugz" between total strangers. We've "met" thousands of strangers in these years since Windows opened up a wider world. Out of all these, I have only met four of them face-to-face, but all four of them are wonderful interactive people. Two of them are partnered with me in a non-profit project, and one of them is now my co-director in a Texas corporation. The fourth is a very unique crusading "Knight" and has become a dear friend. I never would have met these dear people were it not for the keyboard I am typing on right now. I'll leave the "online dating" to those who crave risky business, but I do have a high regard for those "Keyboard Kisses." Thanks, Becky, where ever you are! Great poem, Bill. Keep 'em coming!

Ted

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
As they say..."curiosity kills the cat" and the age of innocence is gone, our society as become the playground of predators.
Well said!

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
That was creative, very cool.
Rebecca

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
A very insightful poem, Bill. It does seem like it's becoming a national pastime, but a dangerous one. Again, very insightful, and well done.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
It seems to be the modern way and your poem tells it how it is these days.A good one!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Online dating with credit reports ...what happened to the old days when gut instincts were the best play in the game? It sure seems cold this way of clandestine history checkups and privacy breaching. No wonder I'm the way I am about dating anymore. There is no privacy for love. To me, this is very sad.
Susan

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Bill,

You are amazing with your depth of perception and ability to capture the reality with your words.

Cynthia


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