Excellent and enjoyable poem, Mary! That's a challenge to pack so much meaning into so few words, but you have pulled it off famously I think!
May your writing touch many, many hearts. my friend.
Fractured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces is adult literature that satirizes famous children's stories, fables and fairy tales. The work is Jay Dubya's twenty-first e-book available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble Nook.
May your writing touch many, many hearts. my friend.
~ a fellow human & poet, Z.B.McClure
like it very much, peace, thanks.
FAKHRE
I lived in Japan for three years.
We gomountaintop.
Thenseetrees aplenty.
After we golake
Rapid boatride too.
Whenfinished allwet.
So bring changeclothes.
OK???
Funnny!.
PS: Like your bio, too. What a fascinating
background you have...and we share a love
for Steinbeck. Aloha!
can I move to Hawaii now?
josie
glad its fixed