Critique
What is more sensual than a woman's body
especially in her mid life years
Why are men attracted to engineering excellence
flowing lines that detract and adhere
What is more becoming than intelligent woman
with sensual smoothness of her words
Why are men taken back a bit
by wise women knowing the meaning of lured
As women make nests men bump chests
women frolic while men bump shoulders
women charge then send out the alarm
while men sound the charge to be fodder
All in all we are made quite different
tho both like a lump of clay
Both balances each other in harmony
yet can lead each other astray
Chauvinism offers suppression
flawed feminism has ruined the weak
Everything is limited to consequences
as both sexes fall prey to critique
Darryl Ehlers
2366 Halverstick Rd
Lynden WA 98264