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Critique
by Darryl L Ehlers → (All Poetry by Darryl L Ehlers)
Saturday, January 14, 2017    Not rated by the Author.
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Defining a woman in a mans eyes and a mans choice of being fodder

 

 

 

                        Critique
 
 
              What is more sensual   than a woman's body
              especially in   her mid life years
              Why are men   attracted to   engineering excellence
              flowing lines   that detract and adhere
 
              What is more becoming   than intelligent woman
              with sensual smoothness   of her words
              Why are men   taken back a bit
              by wise women   knowing the meaning of lured
 
              As women make nests   men bump chests
              women frolic   while men bump shoulders
              women charge   then send out the alarm
              while men sound   the charge to be fodder
 
               All in all   we are made quite different
               tho both   like a lump of clay
               Both balances each other   in harmony
               yet can lead   each other astray
 
               Chauvinism offers suppression
               flawed feminism   has ruined the weak
               Everything is limited   to consequences
               as both sexes   fall prey to critique
 
                      Darryl Ehlers
                      2366 Halverstick Rd
                      Lynden WA 98264
                      lingonberry1.aol.com
       
              
          
 
 
   

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