Missing It (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on September 5, 2005

A mouthful... an absolutely amazing mouthful, Kate!

After 3 reads, stopping to savor and linger in between each, I decided not to take the chance on having a "senior moment" and forget to save this one, I did that before typing a word here... Phew!

It's becoming a delicious habit for me to read you and hear myself... a kinship? soulmate? ESP? Does it need a label? Nah...

That suspended moment, after an idea and before it's set in motion... we do so often miss or forget that part of the processes in life. I take note of it, but it took your marvelous piece for me to actually have the words for it. Damned great, I'd say! You're a wonder-filled PIP! (grin) Thanks... katy xox

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

This is great. I especially like the last two lines. Often we enjoy the preparation before a trip and the photos afterward. But, what happened in between?!

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

Very lovely write
I would have to look at cats differently now
love and peace

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

Kate,

It brought a much needed smile from the overwhelming chaos being broadcast into our weary minds; humor is needed if we are going to be able to start healing (that, and many, many prayers). Cats are supposed to be so graceful...have you ever seen a cat fall down the stairs? I did, and it still makes me laugh when I think of it. :)

Well done, Poet! Thank you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

This is symbolically metaphorical, Kate. A thought-provoking offering, particularly because of your introduction. Thank you. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

I laughed at the cat missing. They have away of pretending that they don't care.

Brilliant metaphors..

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

yes and it's sad for those suffering
but one must perhaps step away. Stress
is such a useless thing, but who can
avoid it. Great write Kate!

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

This really makes you think-cats so rarely miss their mark, little devils, but when they do, they look pretty silly, don't they? Maybe we are just as silly trying to work out God's plan for us and constantly missing the mark.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 2, 2005

Wonderful write, thanks for the break from the horror that is the news nowadays! We are all newsed out!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears <

Thanks for the prayers; we are very grateful that there are some nations who care about America!! God bless you!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

I ditto george on thisone!!

Good jobo here!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

outstanding metaphor and imagery ... sometimes we become so unraveled in the moment, we can fail to experience its overall effect ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

last image is a lasting one, Kate. thanks,

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

You do wonders with your metaphor and themes. Your classes are cetainly paying off Kate in many ways,no missing it there;-)

Love and Peace,
Eileen

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

In the cat's eye, he has allready caught his prey. Perhaps this is the key. Plenty of time to muse about the loss if and when it occurs. I know the feeling of stressing over something and losing the joy that may be found. But we all seem to be in a "fight or flight" mode due to tension and anxiety these days. Fine write, Kate!!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

Sometimes we do miss the point, Kate. If we learn nothing else from Katrina, let her teach us that we must sieze the day, for our future is such an unknown. In the blink of an eye, our life can change forever. We would be wise to live each moment as if it were our last. Excellent offering, Kate.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 1, 2005

Those that prepare a party and clean up after it most times are glad it's over. But then some people are thrilled because preparing the party is as much fun to them as enjoying it. Go figure. Excellent write.