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Writing Right
by Sharon Jordan → (All Poetry by Sharon Jordan)
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Writing Right

 

Write the right

Think the wrong

On and on goes

The inner song

 

Say the right

Do the wrong

So and so knows

Where I belong

 

Do what I say

Don’t what I do

You and you

All know who

 

Up is right

Down is wrong

We all know where

You belong

 

Write, right, alright

Think, blink, wink

If you were me

We would agree

 

That right is right

When you do the do

Wrong is wrong

When I do it too

 

So I’ll right the right

And stop the wrong

If only I could stop

This infernal song

 

Copyright 2007 . Sharon Jordan
 


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 Reviews of "Writing Right"
Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
A splendid "Dr. Seuss" rendition for the human soul.
blessin's (and your name is exactly the same as one of my business partners!)
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on May 15, 2007
there have been times when I knew I was about to something really stupid....I stopped and thought about it....and did it anyway..LOL
Love
Walt

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
This reminds a bit of the war of the sexes...in a funny way...but it could apply to any 'two'...ah, and there's a touch of one-upmanship in here too. Lovely, multi-dimensional play with words, Sharon!

Gina

Reviewed on April 24, 2007
If only I could stop
This infernal song


This last phrase reminded me of Chico Marx at the piano playing a well known tune that had a refrain without an ending. Groucho, sitting impatiently with his legs crossed, chin leaning on hand, remarked, 'When you get to the end let me know and I'll jump off.'
I was also reminded of the apostle Paul who could reflect 'the good that I want to do I don't but the bad that I don't want to do I do...'

I think we can all empathise here
Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 23, 2007
Nicely done, Sharon; on a light tone, much meaning is expressed. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
enjoyed the right...write on!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
It did sound like a song well done.

Peace,
Josie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Write right on...I love this song!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Write the right

Right On! And, Write On!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
Sharon,

Two rights could never be wrong
Hum a few bars and we'll all sing along.

Very catchy write my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Whew, now I am throughly confused.....yet enjoyed!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
I love word plays like this, Sharon! You did this so well -- what a fun poem!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Now that I am thoroughly mixed up, I will say I have to agree, or so I think is right, possibly left...Ed

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Sing song write with a smile at its end.

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

"Writing Right" is a wit-wise writing flowing to the lake of inspiration, (etymologically speaking) on the speed of poetic sound.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Lovely little ditty I must say very lyrical and funny.

Fee


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