The Heart of the Warlord (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on September 30, 2004

Peter, glorious this series...divinely designed.

Amy

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2004

Peter, this is exceptional! This stanza is really the tops! Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Warriors of the light
Consecrated to the Cross
Charged and obligated
To fulfil the Holy Will
Embedded with compassion
Seeking nothing in return
Washed and purified
In the blood of the Lamb

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on September 27, 2004

You're da bomb, Peter. ;-) *smooches*
Nordette

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on September 27, 2004

Glad I found this one, Peter - Simply Marvelous!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on September 26, 2004

Travelling forever
The mysterious meridians
The Warlord and Pagan Girl
Besotted true vine
Bewitched and spellbound
And locked into time
Oneness so glorious
Sequin of the supreme
Mirror images blossoming
With heavenly intent

Warriors of the light
Consecrated to the Cross
Charged and obligated
To fulfil the Holy Will
Embedded with compassion
Seeking nothing in return
Washed and purified
In the blood of the Lamb

IN AWE.. speechless.. Bravo!!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 26, 2004

Amazing poetry always captivates me. Every line is so good.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on September 26, 2004

Profound write...the way you have described everything is simply celestial....a gem....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2004

This touched the depths of my soul...I have no words to describe this incredible poem, other than perfection.

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on September 26, 2004

omg...this is like a dip into epic...

excellent write!
love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on September 25, 2004

Damn!!!
great lines and visuals

read with force
and dignity........really really nice!!!

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on September 25, 2004

Superbly written.
Convinced me that the warlord has actually got a heart!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 25, 2004

Powerfully creative and this enthralling as well, Peter. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on September 25, 2004

Dinine inspiration..perfect in every way...exceptional work Peter.

Vesna

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on September 25, 2004

WOOOOOOW! Simply STUNNING!! I'll go with both Sandra and Chanti; I can barely get my head round this, Peter, and need to immerse myself in it for a bit...that final stanza...NO!! All of them! Just completely drop-dead gorgeous. WISH I WROTE IT!! This is possibly an unwritten poem of mine that I could never get down on paper - and never in such an authoritative or compelling and polished way. This is both blood-washed pure and sacrosanct, but at the same time mystically engaged. My Christian journey for about a year now, embarked upon through my writing, is to bring these two elements into a holistic balance so that the one works through and permeates the other - as you have so eloquently portrayed here. I am completely at your feet with this one, Peter... Thank you seems wholely inadequate!! Kate xx

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on September 25, 2004

Peter, this gives the feeling of soft serenity. Opens the valves of the heart to let through His graces.
Excellently penned and a saving read.

Lisa

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson