Crimson yellow sunrise
Radiating sunbeams
As we traversed
The spellbinding vista
Of the Australian outback
Shimmering silohuettes
Ghosting the landscape
Glorious acacia and mimosa
Adorned the terrain
You and I forever connected
Magnetised by the symbols
Of the Ancients
Buzzards circling
In spirals of majesty
Soaring the arid thermals
Of the wilderness
Primeval knowledge
Linked our souls
Dreamtime degrees
Communicated in ceremony
Secret and hidden
From the profane world
Tokens , signs and validations
Gifted from the Source
Emus and ostriches
Strutted the plains
Dingos and foxes
Stalked for their prey
Didgeridoo drones
Resonated loud and clear
The Southern Cross
Dominated the celestial skies
As we frolicked
Down Under in joy
Midnight Mystery
Flooded the meridians
Encircling Ayers Rock
With energetic endorphins
Consummating our sacred bond
Equal before God's All Seeing Eye
With neither having prominence
Dear Peter,
A wonderfully awesome tribute to Australia!! Is Oz your original homeland Peter? You have shared gifts of this special place with all who read. Well done!
"Gifted from the Source"
Love, Suzie :-D
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Glorious and so visual this is expressed so excellent Peter.
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Well now......I have stood on its red soil.Born and bred in the outback.....and trust me......you do her proud......Ty, ty, Dani
... Sounds a bit more atmospheric than Stonehenge - warmer, at any rate! Mmm - whets my appetite for a bit of a globe-trot sometime in the not too distant future, Peter. You have a gift for telling detail that paints such a canvas with a single stroke - a whole encyclopaedia contained in just four rich stanzas here. TY for this very visual Skytours ad! And, ya know, a bit of romance helps too, doesn't it?! LOL Kate xx
A poetic grand tour of the Australian Outback - after immersing myself in your paradise of versed magic, I actually felt that I had been there ... a write of magnanimous proportions!! Bravo!!
Best wishes my friend,
Robert
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2004
Thank you for painting this beautiful image of a fascinating country.
I will surely go there one day and follow your steps.
Our walk my own dreamtime. And find the answers to all the open questions.
Hope you are doing well. Will write you an email soon.
Love
Amira
ahhh the Southern Cross. (I have an image of it over Mona Loa as my background on this computer) What beautiful images you paint in your verses, Peter. Makes my feet start itching to travel again. Very Nice!
Take care,
Sherry
Peter, I've always dreamed of visiting Australia, it's holds a primitive magic feel to it.
For those of us that may never get the humble pleasure of actually walking it's soils, you've given us a slice of it's beauty.
Thank You!
Lisa
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2004
Well done Pete..THAT'A definitely MY Australia..Oh I do miss it so much..thanks for reminding me of its wondrous beauty!!
One place I would Love to visit...or even move to...I just love this piece....it has something very special about it....something very special "connects" me with this write of yours!!
A Masterpiece, Peter!! Absolutely enchanting, inviting and invigorating! From the first line, 'Crimson yellow sunrise', you had me captured! The whole piece is sensual, enlightening, entwining -- yet, each line has singular images... Amazing. The last four lines, completion.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2004
Peter, once again you have painted a masterpiece, my friend. I loved the descriptive visuals and the poetic dreamscape you laid out! Absolutely a brilliant write! Thank you for sharing it. Take care and soar high!
Finally, the commentary that adds even more to the diagramed version of The Easy Study Bible. Follow the diagramed verses of this new clear translation with a verse by verse commentary. Understand even better the New Testament book of Philippians.
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A wonderfully awesome tribute to Australia!! Is Oz your original homeland Peter? You have shared gifts of this special place with all who read. Well done!
"Gifted from the Source"
Love, Suzie :-D
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays
Ian
~Rose~
Utterly captivating write MATE.
Love Ch'erie
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed
Amy
A poetic grand tour of the Australian Outback - after immersing myself in your paradise of versed magic, I actually felt that I had been there ... a write of magnanimous proportions!! Bravo!!
Best wishes my friend,
Robert
I will surely go there one day and follow your steps.
Our walk my own dreamtime. And find the answers to all the open questions.
Hope you are doing well. Will write you an email soon.
Love
Amira
Take care,
Sherry
For those of us that may never get the humble pleasure of actually walking it's soils, you've given us a slice of it's beauty.
Thank You!
Lisa
Vesna
One place I would Love to visit...or even move to...I just love this piece....it has something very special about it....something very special "connects" me with this write of yours!!
Love Tinka
The closing lines are very impressive, and romanticly wise.
Healthy Blissful Day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
the wonder of Australia, comes to life with your
fantastic imagery! Feel like I was there!
Secret and hidden
From the profane world
Tokens , signs and validations
Gifted from the Source