You are the epitome
Of womanly fertility
Sweet child of God
So pure and tender
Soft soil of compassion
Laden with the truth
Receptive and ready
Blended and merged
Filled with nourishment
Singular seed of the good
Luxuriant and dynamic
Drilled with passion
In the furrows of heaven
Fruit of Paradise
Bathed in Light
I give you my all
You receive in sheer delight
Vibrant bed
Alive and evolving
Mysticall injections
Straight down the line
Match of angels
Of cosmic design
Guaranteed to deliver
Miracles on time
Pleasure of desire
Palpitating and wimpering
Formulated and crafted
In sweet sweet rapture
Symphony of heaven
Rhapsody of devotion
Your hand in mine
Oh sweet surrender
Kisses supreme
Full of us
Soft smiles of adoration
Simmering sighs of romance
Gathered together
In the mixture of connection
Flowing rivers
Of dynamic attraction
Sparklers and sunbeams
Enriched by the divine
Embedded forever
In the potion
Called true love
Copyright by Peter Paton 2004
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Reviews of "The Good Seed and the Good Bed"
Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2004
Peter your romance is a constant reminder of true love's power, this is another beautiful blessing.
Amy
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2004
Soft smiles of adoration
Simmering sighs of romance
Gathered together
In the mixture of connection
Flowing rivers
Of dynamic attraction
..poignant lines..well written..shimmering with spiritual love and down-to-earth-passion...
...Now this is my kind of language and my kind of imagery, Peter!! I can't tell you what this does for me - but it's DEEEEP!! This has struck the rich vein of pure gold in my book. I bless this as a personal message and intimate expression to the lady you love, but if you were to tender it out to another who might cherish it, mine would be one of the hands up first - along with countless others, I suspect! Perfection for me! TY for this - needless to say it goes straight to the top of my library! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
You have a way with words, rightly said. Pleasing, romantic, soothing, sensual, these are just mere words to try to describe your gift.
Sounds like one heck of a combination, my friend! Just another outstanding poetic treasure flowing from your Den. An exceptionally well-penned and tightly woven love poem. Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well. Have a happy holiday.
It unites spiritual wisdom from the East and West to help readers experience Christ consciousness in the here and now. Combining the Oneness teachings of India with a fresh look at the New Testament.
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Amy
Simmering sighs of romance
Gathered together
In the mixture of connection
Flowing rivers
Of dynamic attraction
..poignant lines..well written..shimmering with spiritual love and down-to-earth-passion...
Vesna :)
George
Love Tinka
and true love. Wondrous! Happy Holidays!
Ladye Peg
Happy Holidays