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Zen
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" This is the last example in my series on religions and cultures,.......Look beyond the parameters, keep searching, and leave no stone unturned.....until you find your home "

 


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Solitary you stand in this world alone

you must become detached from your senses

and enter the parameters of nothingness

to find the route to self enlightenment

adapt or die is the eternal war cry

survival of the fittest, is Mother Nature's way

and you must divest yourself of ineptitude

if you wish to become a master of the arts

victory is secured in the mind

and defeat is never contemplated

he who strives, is already beaten

as all effort is doomed to failure

for spontaneity is the overwhelming force

that settles all issues with inordinate confidence

where everything occurs with a will of its own

and flows with the rhythm of the universe

the willow tree bends in the raging storm

while the static oak is wounded by force

the morning sun rises with grace

whilst the evening shadows find their own place

intuition has brought you to me

and the truth will set us free

and the smile of love on your face

is like the thousand petalled lotus

and my presence within the garden of Zen

will never be seen or felt again

 

Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

 

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 Reviews of "Zen"
Reviewed on April 9, 2006
Too bad that this is the last one, but it is a great write! We loved each one!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 8, 2006
you must become detached from your senses
and enter the parameters of nothingness
to find the route to self enlightenment

I really believe that is true, Master of Enlightenment!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Adapt Or Die Is (All) Your Eternal Cry...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
again you amaze me with your insight and knowledge ... enlightenment encompasses an understanding or balanced perspective of all supernal ideologies ... your grasp and creative application to teach is admirable ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Spiritual power of eternity is what I feel when I read this. Thank you for the gift, Peter. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
I'm speechless, Peter. This was so, like the angels whispered this from the angelic realm.This was so beautiful in it's own rare form. I had studied Zen years ago. I can say I found such incredible peace with it's foundation. The Dahli Lama is one of my most passionetly favorite author and I love His Most Holy The Dahli Lama. I treasure him... Something about that way of life, all knowing. I'm expanding, going through spiritual breakthroughs, breaking that glass ceiling.It is shattering. The Divine has placed me with guides that are creating that breakthrough. I wait, I wait for the words of Holiness.. I spoke into intersession today and found great peace. Meditation has been my saving grace.I have my Thomas Kinkade book, studying the beauty of light. Your series of religions have been incredibly so fascinating. Your words echo voices of the Zen Masters. It is brilliantly captivating.Thank you Peter for this masterpiece..

((((( Hugs And Love, JoAnne ))))))

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
I shall meditate on this piece Peter. Top work my friend, I've enjoyed what I've managed to read so far(got some catching up to do)of this series.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Very good and Zen is right up my alley.
Listen to the silence and it will speak
to you. I think! Great stuff Peter!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Peter, I'm sorry to see this series end!!! However you have done such a magnificent job of it. I thank you most heartily for sharing this it takes a lot of work and research to do so! I love some of the attributes of Zen! Also I have found that it helps our spirituality to check all of the different faiths and choose to use the nuggets of wisdom that can be found. I don't understand those who fear to go outside their dogma. I think it shows a lack of trust in their own ability to discern. Anyway, thank you Peter for a fabulous series!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Beautifully done Peter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Yes, look at the qualities of water, a liquid that wears through stone. There are advantages to "going with the flow". Don't think this equates with inaction tho, but conforming to the parameters of
whatever contains you(like water). Do I make sense, lol? All is illusion has finally come to mean, to me, that everything that makes up this world is a symbol or representative of "All That Is". Fine write, Peter. Do apologize for my absence...

Lin

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
If you understand, things are just as they are,

I you do not understand, things are just as they are...Zen proverb

Ed & Rufuz


Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
I really love this, Peter. Zen is a very interesting way of seeing life, one of flow and non-interruptive existence. I like the strength from gentleness, joy from love concepts that this religion takes to heart. You did an excellent job on this beautiful poem.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Peter,

A fantastic ending to this series; I have been educated by a master poet. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
I think I understand how Zen works, it just doesn't appeal to me, although there have been times in my life, those awful down times of my life that I considered getting into the mechanics of it.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Now I really felt this one. Zen is a state where the mind releases pain. It mellow seem harder. I've been a Zen follower at times when I'm sunk.
I have thoroughly enjoyed your series. I hate to see it end but you'll find more to write about and keep me reading and learning from your writes.
I do admire you Peter and thank you for all of your creative thought and poetry.

Susan

Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Beautifully penned, and romantic, too. I am an admireer of Zen, and also of your writing, Peter.

Janet

Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Peter,

Perfection pops from your prolific pen! Very well done; bravo!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Wise words well penned.


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