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Judgemental Delusions
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Just another idle thought write that my muse graced me with the privalege of recording...


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Judgmental Delusion

By: Fee

 

Teardrops as big as the lump in his throat

Threaten the pasted smile he now must wear

He’s laid aside his pen for passion’s writes

Decided that no more would he ever share

 

Imagination fuelled by fantasies so born

Kept his flame from burning down to ashes cold

Some say that he could have just started over

But perhaps the whole story just was not told

 

Stirred feelings that could once make him smile

Gave him strength to face each fading day

He turns off his computer for the last time

A writer scorned now sadly, slowly turns away

 

He’ll spend his days just counting the flies

That may hover round his old man’s chair

Keep his passion bottled on time’s shelf

No one can pass judgement him there

 

Ah but in some lonely hearts he will live on

The man of romantic words and tender heart

They’ll keep a candle burning in his memory

When the final post has played its part…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Judgemental Delusions"
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2008
A true story of many writers Fee, this is sad indeed. Hugs, Peg

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on April 19, 2008
Very sad. R

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Beautiful unique eloquent write
It did brought tears to my eyes
Thinking how many writers have gone through this!
A brilliant poetic view of your thoughts!!
Peace Love And many Hugssss....Morning star

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
profound write Fee,,,

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Heartbreaking write Felix as there are too many that would suffer the day you put your pen down but I like you can read far more into this write, maybe because I have come to know you so well. Keep that pen in motion Cuz.

Love ya face Cuz XOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
This is so very moving, Felix. We are never too old or too young for love and passion, whatever form it takes. And there are so many hungry hearts who are ravenous to be fed. How sad that some may think it inappropriate to continue, for whatever reason. You can bet for every negative vibe we may pick up as to how people may be responding to our work, there are perhaps even more others who are silently devouring it. Ever the compassionate heart and all-seeing eye. No plight of man or woman ever escapes your notice or your pen and caring muse. Bless you, Darlin, Kate xx

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Very touching and heartfelt. It would be a very sad day for any writer to lay down the pen. We should put ourselves out there, but, to share and not to be judged. Who are we to judge? However, in this world we will always be judged, no matter what we do. A poet should never lay down his pen until it is his/her own decision and he feels he has nothing more to say; those that judge can spoil our day; but, we can't let them stand in our way. This is a very deep and touching poem.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
In a world of blind people you can ask why write, in a world of deaf people you can ask why sing? but then again...for those that can see and will see, for those that can hear and wish to hear...a writer has no choice but to take the quill and make that teardrops as big as the lump in the throat as phrases full of words that can touch the soul.

Georg

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
This write is very heartfelt - I too, have had the thoughts of putting down the pen and moving on. That is until I was introduced to AD and more importantly you. Your words I look forward to on a daily basis. I love your romantic side, as you do mine. We are kindred spirits, Fee. Let us not be judged. We write what we feel or have felt or want to feel. These are our fantasies for all of AD to read and comment. But, alas, no one really knows how deep or how true or how real they are except for us. For you or your muse to flick that switch, would be the death of a great poet and author. I am sure that many feel as I do - you bring to this site an inspiration - never think any less. It would be a shame to not have your words to start my day! So with that said, heres to us and our romantic foolishness.... :-) Look forward to more words from the east. Keep those fires burning!

Much Love,
Sanja xox

Reviewed on April 17, 2008
So painful to contemplate and perfectly penned Fee.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Excellent writing sweet Fee,so powerful...have a wonderful and safe day...HUgssssss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Sensitive, poigniant write, Fee...pulls at the heart.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Yes Kathy I agree with you about putting oneself out there but should it be to be judged...or just to share?

fee

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
I am glad to hear that this is your muse and not you. Yet, I think that when anyone of us leaves our passion 'in the dust,' there are reasons that remain close to ones heart. I can't help but feel a certain sadness for those who choose a difficult path rather than put themselves 'out there' for all to judge.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
This one tugs on the heart strings, Fee. A subject close to my heart & I'm sure many other writers' hearts. I've often felt this way, but passion has a way of relighting that inner wick even when we try to give up what we love to do. Thank you for sharing this one! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
I love the way you wrote this--so heartbreaking--and dear, kind poet friend, thank you so very much for your reviews and comments yesterday--you lifted my spirits

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
So tenderly written and full of many emotions that I am sure many feel from time to time. Sometimes even the good things in our life must come to an end....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Excellent write, somewhat sad. A very talented writer should never give up writing! Keep posting poems.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
He turns off his computer for the last time

I often think I just might do that one of these days myself, and I think many a writer down through the ages has had many a similar thought; first with sharp stone, then with pencil, then pen, then typewriter, and now with computer.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
It can happen.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Dear Fee -this is a a fine write, shared thoughts and feelings i have had sometimes too - your writes have reached me because you write from the heart and soul, a heartfelt thank you from me, Nicky xx

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Sometimes Dear Fee what can be taken as judgement and scorn is really caring and loving boundaries not meant to hurt. There is only One that can during good and bad times.....

"Stirred feelings that could once make him smile
Gave him strength to face each fading day"

Deborah:)

Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Heartbreaking - the Poet pens beauty in the midst of ugliness, yet doesn't sugarcoat the truth; to give up writing would be horrible to contemplate! Excellent write, Fee. Don't put down your pen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Those words are precious tokens. Imagine if Shakespeare had given up writing. You give us much to ponder.

Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Oh No No No
We Can Not Have The Actuality Of That,
Great Emotion Provoking Write Fee!
I did my CNA & HHA clinicals at a Nursing Home. I could hardly work. I was so distraut at their life plastered all over the walls (Photos, plaques, awards blah blah blah) & no family to visit bit be annoyed on christmas. I would rather call Dr. Kavorkian.
What this all means is when there is nothing left we wither & die inside. I've seen it. It's awfully saddening.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Heartbreaking write, Fee; I hope that you'll never end up posting your last poem. You are a valued asset to the den; we need you here! Very well and powerfully penned; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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