Thank you, Fee. This one makes my inner self want to explode! I love the way that you have outlined a woman's body - it adds to the flow of erotica. Again, as I am fired up - I love this write....
Luv Sanja xo
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2008
WOOHOO...hot, hot, hot...enjoyed the thrill give in my mind...heading for the cold shower all alone...LOL...lovely Erotica Fee...Hugs, Peg
:)
Goodness It Is Warm In Here I say!!!
You Have Grabed The reins Of Passionate Desires with ownership & turned Loose the Freedom of the Saddle ;)
Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Whoa...this is a hot one...you have
Definitely written one that will wake
many a mind up.... don't you just love
Nippy spring morning.... excellent work on your
Expressing sensuality....in desperate need of a cool shower!!
Love Peace and Hugessssss...Morning Star
Are you sure you aren't here in Nashville, Great write and great you are sharing whatever it is you are drinking as Georg said this is the first of your second thousand and a wonderful way to start them.
Fee, you should send me some of that water you are drinking, because it is something in the water, isn't it?
And it is not the One Thousand and One, it is the First of the Second Thousand you Canadian poet you!
Georg
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on April 19, 2008
The flow of this (pardon the pun) is wonderful; I love the brevity in your lines as if they are thoughts just big enough to fit between heavy breaths...
If you took every major epic fantasy that has ever been written and twisted them all into one fantastic tale of magic, sword play, and just plain old fantasy fun, you might get the first half of this 235,000 word monster of a read. The last half is a
Danielle and Nina are rescued from their wicked step-mother by Emma the Yellow Dream Train who takes them on adventures. When Nina learns she has the ability to speak to animals, Emma and the other trains teach her how to use it.
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Luv Sanja xo
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Goodness It Is Warm In Here I say!!!
You Have Grabed The reins Of Passionate Desires with ownership & turned Loose the Freedom of the Saddle ;)
Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Definitely written one that will wake
many a mind up.... don't you just love
Nippy spring morning.... excellent work on your
Expressing sensuality....in desperate need of a cool shower!!
Love Peace and Hugessssss...Morning Star
Your passion is burning up my PC.
Blessings and love,
Susan
Love ya face Cuz XOXO, Rose
And it is not the One Thousand and One, it is the First of the Second Thousand you Canadian poet you!
Georg