Fantasy Lover (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Drenched in a moment’s sweet devotion

Basking in the whisper of a summer breeze

Holding your hand against kisses on my lips

Warm breath tasting warm breath like a tease

While pressing passion against swaying hips

Fleeting hungry images like wisps of smoke

Disappearing in the sad unfairness of time

Little painful drabs of what could have been

If I had been yours and you had been mine

I blow one last kiss through teary raindrops

Then slowly walk back alone into my head

Where doors aren’t locked to true romance

And we could share morning laughter in bed

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

The yearning and sadness of reaching for someone who is just out of reach, different lives and times that keep you separate, you have portrayed that longing brilliantly. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

This is truely beautiful Fee! Your words are songs to my heart....

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

One of your best romantic writes yet, Fee. Beautiful, haunting, yet realistic with gentle and loving imagery. Sweet~
Sheila

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Fee, your inspiring words touch me deeply.
I so enjoy your poetry, it is simply wonderful
Peace, love, and light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Seems like we are both writing in Fantasy Genre today Fee! You are writing of love, and I'm talking...Yeah never mind..
:):)
Hugzzzz Cherrypie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Fantasy is always better than reality, unfortunately. Excellent poem of yearning and teasing and bittersweet memories. Liz

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

and behind the eyes of my heart
I will forever know
the passions of you within the gates of my unleased desires
yearning to know this beautiful reality....

you inspired me :)
ok I am jumpin on this inspirational pen wagon too :)
I Love The Poem Fee,
"If I had been yours and you had been mine" these words are so beautiful yet I also reach for tissues.....we all have that one love or passion & questions "What If".....Love It!!!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Fee this poem is exceptional. Oh to be such a woman who can inspire the fire and beauty of a man's soul and pen!

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Romantic...sounds so wonderful Fee,

Thank you for sharing the beauty of this write with us all.

Blessings and continued enlightenments,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Quite passionate, and quite good, Mr. Fee.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

A very moving poem,, that many can relate to,, I know I can....Beautiful imagery.
:)Christine

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

A beautiful touching write Felix, you have brought the past, present and even the future into your words with much emotion. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

I will prefer all of it at the shore of our secret place by the river where no past can intrude or future whisper realities, just that tender moments with the only company of a discret moon hiding now and then behind the clouds...and then...I wake up, and she isn't there.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 17, 2008

Beautiful, romantic...and sad."I blow one last kiss through teary raindrops,".....beautiful line.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

a tender and lonesome feel to this--"then slowly walk back alone into my head"--powerful images

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

A very endearing, meloncholy write laced with many deep emotions, perhaps of regret, perhaps of opportunities passing into the annals of time....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

Exquisitely penned and felt, Fee, this is beautiful. Well done -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

You have touched my heart and I know you have touched
many hearts here at the Den throughout the years. Your writings
are superb Fee and I for one cherish them. "Your one last kiss resides within each heavenly trance" Take Care dear Friend, Peggy

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

This one seems different from you. But I like it. It's almost like a chant.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 16, 2008

In this romantic plea there are so many scenarios that could spin off and every reader will have their own. Once again you give magic to the possibilities that love gives us always.
Blessings and love,
Susan