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Wide Eyed Dead
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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where the dark begins and the sorrow wends...here I shall go... Felix L. Perry
*Wide Eyed Dead* *By: fee* *a mist shrouded road* *like a dirty gray lace* *leads through shadows* *dragging over the dead* *skulking around tombstones* *clinging to the smell* *of damp moldy dirt* *freshly dug among* *the stones of the ancients* *the gravedigger’s humming* *songs of the expired* *yellow bones rattling* *‘neath ragged strips of skin* *worm holes and maggots* *no angels dare to thread* *where only the forsaken* *claim their four by eight* *lien on t0is weed infested* *unholy soil…* *ah but tis here we meet* *my lips on your lips* *the sanctity of forbidden love* *two hearts beyond the edge* *two souls not inclined to* *give in to the humanity* *of what morality seeks* *we will lay with the dead* *for they will accept us* *as surely as the living reject us* *into the abyss let us go* *where we can walk as one…*

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 23, 2008

Perfect as usual Cuz, dark but from the heart. Tis the season.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on October 21, 2008

I love this dark write, perfect for the season we are in, and i love the romantic ending. :)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 19, 2008

Yikes! I like this unique and engaging poem! It's energy swept me along its eerie paths to observe these lovers who dared defy the norm in order to satisfy their desires. Extremely well expressed, Fee! Thanks.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on October 18, 2008

I don't think I have read a dark write by you Fee. I liked this one alot. Has everything in it. Love, death, sadness, wow who could ask for anything more.
hugs
kathy

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Wow, this is wonderful writing, Fee. Your descriptive verses are deeply stirring and there's a dark passion that permeates your words. This style is reminiscent of the classics in many ways and I believe this is one of your best in terms of unadulterated emotion.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Very grim romance here. Love cannot die, but dwells deep in the bones even after the last breath of life has expired. Excellent, Fee!
A hallowing romantic tale!

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

deep death of lovers grave
lusting beneath the brimstones of silence
sweetly the thunder echoes
inside the the tomb of erotic darkness

I Loved Your Closing Stanza....Oh Sweetly Deep & Haunting Fee :)

Much Love To You
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Holy Cow Fee, I sure hope this is a Halloween tribute or something. The last place I'd pick is a cemetary especially this time of year, and I'm Dr. Bonnie...This is some poem you've penned, there's love, sadness, fear, death, its got everything...You are one talented man. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Don't you hate when you get sand inside your mouth? and those gravediggers, can't change once in a while their tune?

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Eerie, dark and well written!

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Fee, dark and on the wild side. I loved this poem. I will be thinking of this one for some time I must say. Excellent write my friend.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Loving this dark write, Fee. Very creative!
Sheila

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Brrrrrrrrrrrr, this is chilling, Fee, dark sadness, effectively penned. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

love in the cemetary--kinda sexy!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Sad write, but so very well written, Fee; hope you are okay!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(