..truly sad as it is a song too many sing!

Way to go, no point flogging dead horses eh. Another Brilliant song...HEy when are we going to Jam together??
:) hugzzz Cherrypie

This write rings of wisdom, Fee. Nicely written. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Excellent!! I can hear you singing this with your guitar strumming along, great song.

Touching write and sounds like it could be a country hit to me!

Country or not...that's a great poem!

Well done,

take care,

William

This could be a hit Felix..
Ron

a country tune for sure!

Yep, that is all Country. I could hear it on the radio now. ~ Sara

Oh Fee I know you and you are a big cuddley romantic teddy bear who wouldn't just walk away that easy but yes a lot of folks pull this line on their partner and it is a cheap one for sure. Another great write Cuz but thats what i expect from you.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXOXO, Rose

Arrrrgg--just twist that knife one more time.
Truly a country song with each little twist.
Well, at least you got me smiling.
Sweets--RaeLynn

Cool photograph, nice bike! It is never easy when two people begin to walk different paths, but it does happen and each find a way to get through it and move on. Very touching write, much heart and emotion in it...

Be always safe,
Karen

Splitting the sheet is never fun. Great write. Liz

Oh a somebody done somebody wrong song and very well written Fee.

An excellent write! I come from a long line of long marrieds and when I think of all they did to hold their marriages together it really makes me feel sorry for people today. They do not seem to realize that love is not a static thing but a living, breathing entity that must be nurtured through hard work and commitment. But our society is all about immediate gratification so when the initial glow passes they begin to think they've "fallen out of love" and start looking elsewhere instead of at the person with whom they've already shared so much. How many good relationships have been sacrificed on the alter of "me first," I wonder? Rebecca

Replaceable - aren't we all? Great song. Play it - record it - put it on youtube :-)
Love,
Becca~

very cool song Fee - now, where's my guitar? Get this: On Friday night, a now long dead Brazilian Cowboy legend wearing a batterered hat and lasooooo, smiled and winked at me, blew me a kiss too - he was borrowing the body of a rather attractive woman medium at the time, at an Umbanda meeting where people twirl around, sing, dance, do healings and readings, smoke very fat cigars and drink rum - it was nice to meet him...again?!! Lol!! Nowt stranger than the truth -the cheeky revival in the last line of your song is super -i feel like buying in a few twirling rounds myself - yeah! :o) xx

Fee,
So sad but true, couples break up every day! Fee, you should go into writing country songs. I was raised listening to country music and still love it. You put yourself in anothers shoes well in this one, my friend.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Heartbreaking write that happens all too often in today's world!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Terrific write. So sad about breaking up, whether this is a song or not, it still hits hard.

Mary

You are absolutely right Fee. If you have to "think about it" that is a sure sign that their is no love left to think about. Another great work Fee.
hugs
Kathy

Fee,

"If You Need Time To Think About It..." it's already too late, I think. Sad: my parents were married for 39 years when Mom died. Daddy remarried 6 years later, he and his second wife were married 12 years when HE died.

My brother (Happy Birthday, Kenny) and his first wife were married 25 years when his wife passed away. He's been married to his second wife for a couple of years - and they're still in love.

That's what I most admire about them: they honored the wedding vows, 'til death did them part. Too many divorces going on ... and I'm in the ranks. Was married 2 1/2 years when my husband divorced me ... haven't dated much since. Not that I don't miss him (at times, I do), it's just that I feel like I'd be cheating on the memory of what we first had ... you know?

That has nothing to do at all with your poem ... sorry, your words got me to thinking. You poem is heartbreaking, because of how it is nowadays ... well done, my (((friend))).

Hey, saw that Jimmie won yesterday's race. :) 'Least my man did better this time 'round - 8th place, instead of near last, like the last race. LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I enjoy reading this poem/song.Very well written full of knowledge.In relationships people just need to grin and bear and not throw in the towel.Take care

Edwin

I wish Johnny Cash could have belted this one, my kind of thing I guess, and that mean Harley put that final point at the end.
My grandpa once say to me that "when you broke a glass don't look too long at the spilled drink boy! go get another glass"

Georg

Oh how sad this write is mainly because its so true. What every happened to sticking in there and until death do us part. Gee, I can't tell you how many times I feel in and out of love with my husband and he will me in the 45 years of marriage, but we stuck it out. This poem says it all. Love, and hugs, Bonnie