The Price (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

I think all of us have done things we are not proud of but as we get older we change. Maturity brings with it common sense . Great write Fee.
hugs
kat

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 24, 2009

Fee,
A courageous write. Sounds like there is plenty of good in ya'. None of us are perfect. Thanks for sharing these thoughts. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on January 20, 2009

Wonderful write partner!

God knows our hearts.

Man trys to judge but God is all powerful.

God is our judge and our provider.

Amen

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on January 16, 2009

Now who is being authentic........just a response to your review of my poem on authenticity. This is lovely and you are lovely too.
Blessings, J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 14, 2009

Fee this is most touching...we are all sinners..but how beautiful to be the best we can be...

Reviewed by Anze Mofor

Reviewed on January 14, 2009

This is a Paean. A very beautiful one. I think when we open our hearts to God, He opens His heart to us. It does not mean we never sin nor make mistakes but the new path with Him is always better because He picks up and dusts us off and places us right where we can keep on moving like a real father will do to a child who falls and turns to Him for a helping hand. You have touched my heart with this one Fee :) Love it.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 14, 2009

Me too.

~W~

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Your broken heart and contrite spirit shows. Very beautiful.

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

I see God everywhere in everyone. Some folks, however, are clearly trying to serve two Masters.

Love this poem,

Sandy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Expressions of innter thoughts and a strength to pull one's self up no matter at what age, passionate and insightful writing my friend....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Fee, I am right there with you-the picture you chose is also profound!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

"I saw the light but I didn�t see the steeple" -- Perfectly said, Fee, and your mode of prayer is so much more honorable than those who avoided that homeless man on their way inside to "pray" -- well done!!!

Ted

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

This is one of the things that I love and respect about you Fee...the honesty. You always say, "I'm not a believer" or you seem to slide around the "God" subject...and that's ok...the thing is not that we use the God and Jesus words...because like you say, the bottom line is what is in our heart...God (even if you don't use His name these days) is still listening to your heart and you can't hide it... So..being the kind, thoughtful and beautiful human being that you are...well, I know God loves you mate....call it anyway you want... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Beautiful honesty

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

I know you dear Cuz and I think you pray in a wonderful way as I have seen and felt your heart and you seem to share it with all in need. Thank you for sharing an excellent write.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Felix,

A most honorable write. Honest. Open. Would that more live this way ... well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Even better this time around, this another that should be submitted, love it, especially the ending.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

I wish, sometimes, that I could be as good as you sound, Fee...I keep feeling that I would be contradicting so many years of disbelief & God knows how I have been and I wouldn't blame him if he just didn't care for me...you hit a chord with this write, sir, thank you...Ed

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Oh Fee we all come short of the Glory of God...all those things your mother taught you are there...Santa Fee is the best example. You beautiful loving writes are the other. God's had you in his arms the whole time...your spirit is what God loves as we do. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Fee, only those that have walked on those roads you did would know the scope of your words. Because reality sometimes is more weird that any corkscrew twisted fantasy.
Deep, raw but the sincerity of one patiently waiting at Peter's door.

Georg

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Fee, that's what it's all about. Fine write, and fine way to live.
Your friend, Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

To do my best, and try to help those less fortunate

A fine way to live, I'd say.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

Great expressive write, Fee; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva