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The Old Vet
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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This is just a work of fiction but I often heard my mother speak of the soldiers who returned from the war and were shell shocked...today it is called by a different name but we still treat them the same....


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In a cabin in the backwoods

Trapper John would spend his final days

He was four years on the front

He saw death in many ways

 

 

Then he came home to Canada

But the city noises triggered fright

Shell shocked is what they called him

And he could never sleep at night

 

 

The Veteran Affairs gave a pension

But not enough for him to survive

So he packed a knapsack full of hopes

And dreams of staying alive

 

 

 

So he headed out for the North Woods

An old shack up round Hudson Bay

Ran a trap line across a mountain

He survived year to year from day to day

 

 

They found him frozen in a snow bank

At the ripe old age of eighty-two

An empty whisky bottle by his side

His war medals on his chest…it’s true

 

 

And in his cabin in the North Woods

In an old Player’s tobacco can

Was every check the government sent him

Wrapped up in a rubber band

 

 

 

"Please won't you give these

to the old soldiers veteran’s home

I don’t need them where I’m going,

and there are so many all alone.”

 

 

 

So they buried him at sundown

As the Bugler played the mournful taps

On hillside in the North Woods

Respectful soldiers tipped their caps…

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by John Perry (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2009
Hey Bro,
I remember dad telling the story of an old aunt coming to see him after he got back in 45'. Knowing that he had been in Italy she asked him if he had seen the Pope. He told her yes, he went out with one of the Pope's daughters. The old aunt replied "poor boy, he's shell shocked"!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on June 18, 2009
Amen!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 15, 2009
This is a fantastic poem, Fee. It feels sincere and respectful. A real hero lives in these words. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on June 15, 2009
Ah, this one gets you right in the gut. Heartbreakingly penned, Fee. Words fail me -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 14, 2009
Wonderful write! Shades of the movie, 'Jeremiah Johnson'. One of my uncles suffered from this affliction. He was never the same after WW2. This is such a tender imagined write that I'm sure is reality for all too many...

Lin

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on June 14, 2009
Love this one, Felix. Your historical writing is straight to the point and full of emotion, rather than a run-off of facts, and that's great. I am a history nut, WW1 being one of my favorites, and this reminded an awful lot of the great book and film by Pat Barker called "Regeneration" in the UK and "Behind the Lines" in the US. It also touches on the lives of the WW1 poets Sassoon, Graves and my poetic idol, Wilfred Owen. You would love the film.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 14, 2009
such a beautiful yet sad write-there are some who would romantisize about his way of life-love the can of checks!

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
I get the feeling that he was content with his life in the woods and his memories of valor. A man to salute and respect. See how real you have made him? It seems that he has passed through my life as well.
Connie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
A very moving and meaningful tale, Fee. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
So powerful and so sad. You have written this so well, Fee.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
At this very moment an old soldier is dying without VA checks and without money for treatment because he can't produce the name of the pilot that doused him with Agent Orange or the Cong that shot him in Nam.
This poem of yours is so real in 2009 that it should scare many to take action.

Georg


Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
This is so sad but all together to true for many. Sometimes I think it's not the wars themselves that the solider fears, it whats in store for him when he returns to the land he fought to protect. Nicely done Felix, very sad indeed.

Reviewed on June 13, 2009
All of our veterans deserve to be treated with dignity and honor, and NOT just the Iraq or Afghanistan ones; how about taking care of ALL of our veterans from ALL wars???? Shame on our government for treating them this way; this should NOT BE!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Powerfully heartbreakingly penned; well penned, Fee!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
I've sadly known a few just like the one in your story, and one of them was a good friend. War truly is Hell.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 13, 2009
A man that never put himself before others..but always fought his battle of war and life with others before him..remarkable sadness in this story, may we all be so generous as he.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
Powerful poetry.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
for a work of fiction, I believe it rings much truth

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
I love this old vet, Fee. He wears his scars with dignity.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
war can have a profoundly negative effect on returning soldiers ... some never get over the stress and horror ... you capture this soldier's scenario quite vividly, Felix ...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
Too many are suffering today from this but yes today it is known as Post Tramitic Stress Syndrom and they need our love and respect along with our understanding of what they have gone through. Thank you Felix for a wonderful write.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
I too tip my hat & send them all that come home from battle a most fervent salute...Ed

Reviewed on June 12, 2009
Fee
the selfless heart of true soldier is pronounced throughout this entire poem...maybe fiction....but somewhere more than likely maybe not
my head bows in tribute just the same
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie


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