"There it is!" Diane exclaimed;
But did we need that tag?
The ! mark told us how Di spoke
The author needn't nag.
It was red! or It was black!
(Should readers be surprised at that?)
Real people don't "exclaim" all day
They're much more likely just to "say".
"It was sudden! She was there!"
Too much exclaiming, here, to bear.
When !!! infests your screen
When !!! is all about
Remember - few make better sense
And weed those !!!!s out.
I like this one Sally. Did you send work for Poetry Life & Times a while back? I think I featured some of your work a while ago. Feel free to send some more poems again, visit my message board and I'll send you my new email address.
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
OK Sally, I can see where this is leading. I think I can speak for all men here...
When you start to write about your periods, I'm outta here!
LOL.
-James
Well I am going to be totally honest......its a wonderful mixture of fun and understandable sillyness.....but, then again, I dont understand it......lol......la la la la
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
Awww but I like !!!!! :-) Fun write, but there is a point to what you have said.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
haaa !!!!!!!!!!! haaaaaaa!!!!!!LOl excellent point i think?
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When you start to write about your periods, I'm outta here!
LOL.
-James
(wink!! wink!!)