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Passing Marks
by Charles B. Neff → (All Poetry by Charles B. Neff)
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A family vacation on a delightfully unexpected expanse of beach, level, smooth and vacant. A cloudless Costa Rican sky and light wind. Just right for volleyball and for thoughts about visual (and visible) impressions.

 

              Passing Marks
 
A level expanse in Tamarindo,
As if machine-rolled at low tide.
Smooth enough for bowls or croquet,
Sitting softly on a broad spit
Between a waist-deep estuary,
The Pacific and its far horizon.
 
We set our poles and guy ropes
Hang the net, mark the boundaries,
Then launch into happy competition.
Our patch is soon a trampled jumble:
Criss-crossing imprints of the action,
Of hands, feet, knees and elbows.
 
We leave a portrait of human energy,
Interrupting a surround of smoothness.
But should we return tomorrow
There’ll be no proof of our presence.
The knowing tide is a relentless eraser,
Nature’s moon-driven Zamboni.
 
Charles B. Neff
January 4, 2013

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Passing Marks"
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 11, 2013
yes the tide makes everything pristene on the beach every day
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 11, 2013
Reads like a very good time. The reference to the tides as being like a Zamboni is wonderful. It looks like no one can mess up that beach very long.

Ron


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