Liquid Fire (poem) by Sage Sweetwater on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2006

This "hot" write definitely starts a fire on the reader.
Well done!
Amira

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

your poetic passion crystalizes from the inner flames of eros and mesmerizes like the sirens of Scylla ... in other words, hot write! ;)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

refreshing write full of wonderful descriptions!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

A passionate and sensual poetic creation, Sage. Most compelling. Gives rise to inner feelings and emotions. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

A wonderfully passionate write and the picture was an excellent choice as well. You certainly have a fantastic way with creating mental imagery and I think it's safe to say you've lit a number of fires with this piece.

Well done.

Peace,

~Rose~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Sage,

First Felix's passionate write. Then Alexandra's...now yours...I am a cinder, burnt by the HEAT you wrote! So much for praying for rain.....this one lit the fuse and blew me apart! Outstanding *clapping*!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Got the den smokin. Well done

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

The den needs a fire extinguisher after this one Sage;-) You are very creative and do this so well!

Eileen

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Way to start a poetic fire!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

You ignite a bonfire of passion and desire in this enthralling
spiritual tour de force !
You are a past master at word linkage and play, in deftly mixing the surreal and ethereal properties in a tantalizig and compelling form Sage
Complete with awesome visuals !
Rock on !
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

"guts from morning / glories" Gotta love it. Very, VERY sensual is this treatment of passion's flame erupting withint the soul and physical pursuits of lust and love. You cryptic verses are so well done. You are truly a master at this particular art form. Damn! You warmed the old guy up, I'm here to tell you. LOL Very well done, Sage.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

A hot firey write.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
kay.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

You just burnin' up of late girl...Ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Very nice. I love the ending!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

Very sensual, Sage. I could almost feel the fire ignited in the spirit and body.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on January 14, 2006

At "tincture blisters" beginning could be the start of a whole new poem. This one is, ooowhee!, somethin' else sistah girl!
blessin's and peace
cynth'ya