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Angel
by Sara Hogan → (All Poetry by Sara Hogan)
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A poem of a broken girl

If only you had heard her cry; heard her cry
If only you had heard her scream
Then maybe she would be
Still alive


Her mind is broken and empty inside
She’s lost all truth
She knows only pain
Her battle is lost
It’s her holocaust
Her fight is done
But she hasn’t won
She’s giving in
To the demons in her head
She wanted to be free
But you let her be
You didn’t see the warning signs
You didn’t comfort her when she cried
And now she’s gone insane
The voices scream at her
They won’t let her be
Her chains pull tighter
This is what’s happened


To your angel:


Your angel has fallen to the ground
Your angel is running low on fuel
Your angel is fighting with herself
Your angel is losing tonight


And she dies
And she cries
Oh, she cries


Your angel’s battle is lost
She lost to her mind
And her mind made her cry
Doesn’t it pain you to know
You could have helped


Your angel might still be alive
Had you only
Heard her cry
You angel might have been set free
If you had only heard her scream


Your angel has lost the fight!
Your angel’s blood spills tonight!

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 Reviews of "Angel"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
This is sad but very compelling, Reyanna. Sometimes, we just don't want to hear. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2006
This one is so sad................ The angel should have been saved. happens to many times.... Welcome to the Den.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
I agree with Karla below completely !
This was one angel that should have been saved Reyanna !
Welcome to the Board !
Peter

Reviewed on February 3, 2006
Reyanna,

If only they'd listened...a powerful, powerful thought provoking write of what might have been had they heard her cries and did something about it. Thank you for your words today, Poet!

Let me be the first to welcome you to Author's Den; you're among friends.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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