deadly peaceful (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

Josie Maria
Good lines, very good piece, do you like this ending? I retreat in smile...
Rod

full force
it’s all around
you can smell it’s power
you can taste it's strength
but here now
there is quiet
so eerie
so deadly peaceful

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on January 2, 2003

hope you are talking about the weather

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on December 29, 2002

I know the feeling. It's always calm before the storm.

~ Sandie and Buddy ~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 29, 2002

knowing that at any moment
it will hit
full force.....
That kind of feeling I had not so long ago..
domestic storm......not rainstorm.....gggrr
happy new year

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

Josie this is as powerful as the storm it so wonderfully describes!
~Happy New Year~
~Gods and Goddesses Bless~
Nikki

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

Josephine, I love this, the storm can actually mean many things here. Great poem. Floria

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

Hi Jo
Thanks for your comment on my pictoral.
Had it in mind since your challenge first came out. My stepmom is in ICU in Nevada, so I'm gone a lot right now. This is right on, by the way--nothing like the dead silence seconds before a tornado drops down.
P.S. See my bio page for Sketchman's depiction of me!!! Yes.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

good write! hope your storms go away; and hope california escapes the worst of the wild weather y'all are having out west! my prayers are with you; stay safe, and be careful, okay? with much love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

This is simply great Joshie

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

terrific write, josie! ya think the storm's over, and WHAMMO, it hits from the other side, stronger than before. excellent visuals...excellent verse! (((HUGS))) and happy new year to you...thanks for your friendship and support! love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

Josie - I can read this one in many ways and all of the apropos...wonderful writing!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on December 28, 2002

The calm before the storm! So powerful!