war
good God yall what it is good for
………….absolutely nothing
say it say it again
war
it’s not just a song
or a card game anymore
so I’m shook up
who isn’t
I’m not saying or feeling
anything different than
the rest of the world is
some believe
we have to do what we have to do
okay
fine I believe that too
some believe
we’re the bullies punching our way
through the playground
maybe so maybe not
alls I know is that
there are some scary people out there
some
people that don’t give a rats
about me or you
that probably believe
the only good American is a dead one
scary
does that mean
we should go kill em
I
don’t
know
and I am scared
about the consequences
me?
I’m the one who puts the friggin
spiders outside
but I guarantee
if
someone threatened to harm
one hair
on one of my kids
I’d no more hesitate to pull the trigger
than to take my next breath
pure and simple
is that or is that not
what this is all about
that’s
all
I
want to know
did not these Bad guys mess with us
are not these Bad guys
amassing weapontry to come into my house
and hurt my babies
that’s all I want to know
I could care less about
oil
if I have to buy a friggin horse
I will
I could care less about
politics
the boys and girls we hired to do the job
best do it the Right way
I could care less
who’s on who’s side
alls I care about
is
making sure
there are no more days like
September 11th 2001
there are no more
war
hate it
sending military
hate it
alienating allies
hate it
necessary
I just don’t know
if I did know
it was the only way
would I do it
hell ya
it’s called survival
and besides
my husband would put me out in the street
if
I said otherwise
war
good God y’all
what is it good for
absolutely
nothing
say it
say it
again
I just don't know.......
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Reviewed by Cusin Dave
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
Salute and honor all how have and will protect, sacrafice, and defend the hair on our childrens' head.
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
I think war is a game to politicians to further their politicalal aims and gains. I also put the spiders out when it's warm, and leave them indoors when it's cold. "Our greatest enemy is fear." - don't know who said it first, but it's the truth. I'm scared, too, but for the whole planet. Locate and lock up terrorists, make presidential criminals pay for their crimes through the world court, but WAR? ATTACK? -
Even after Mr. Powell's speech today to the UN, I do not personally see sufficient current threat to us (USA), nor sufficient ties to the twin towers disaster, to justify attacking Iraq. The UN needs to get it's act together towards it's original aims. The US needs to stop acting like their perceived enemies. (IMO)
Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2003
Lady hold on tight to those children, life is inevitable. kill em all let the 8 armed monkey or old man in the sky sort em out...right? well maybe not, regardless of what anyone thinks we are going hunting hopefully this time we will take care of that problem and move on to the next cause the list is always growing...anyway wish massarat was around be interesting to hear her take...by the way if your husband tosses u out I have a spare bedroom u can use-
This touches the heart because it came from yours,,,being scared and confused is very honest emotions,,anybody in their right minds would be the same way. All we can do is pray,,,it does help,,,Lisa
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
What if we have a war and no one shows up? I am surrounded by people whose only source for the truth is Jerry Springer, so I don't fight fair, I turn up Rush Limbaugh. Great Poem one of pure and truthful thought.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
I can't put the spider out....it creeps me out, so my little girl does with the broom of course leaving them unharmed…otherwise we’d be overrun with mozzies. :| War is a no win deal..But I feel for the men that go...and I support them. A sensitive well thought out write Josie. Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Alas, how come someone elses child has to die to save mine? That's what confuses me.. where are all the good 'hitmen' when you need them? All this because of one, no good, pig of a Sadam! You wrote your heart, josie, and of all the stuff on this, yours brought the tears.. it's awful being confused... worse to be afraid. Thank you. katy.
Reviewed by Lady Peg
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Josie sorry it took off before I finished this dam board.
Anyway I thought this to be a powerful write.
Thanks Peg
If the world was run by people who put the spiders outside rather than kill them I would be a happy woman.
Go Josephine!!!
Reviewed by Hugh Rection (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
really well said Josie
I don't want war
but I can't help but feel the people slammin the US would be the first ones to ask us to help if they got attacked
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
We all have fears. But will bombing Iraq and killing innocent people make us any safer? Very good.
tom,that wasn't friendly fire that hit london in ww2, it was aimed right where it went and america should have come in sooner but it wasn't our fault that that one happened and you are not canadian so get off our case (wink)
Reviewed by Morchuis
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Hi Jo,
Nice one, just try to get the bullets to fly in the right direction this time, that friendly fire is deadly,its a wonder there anyone left on our side, be safer with the enemy.--------Morchuis
Even after Mr. Powell's speech today to the UN, I do not personally see sufficient current threat to us (USA), nor sufficient ties to the twin towers disaster, to justify attacking Iraq. The UN needs to get it's act together towards it's original aims. The US needs to stop acting like their perceived enemies. (IMO)
Anyway I thought this to be a powerful write.
Thanks Peg
Go Josephine!!!
I don't want war
but I can't help but feel the people slammin the US would be the first ones to ask us to help if they got attacked
I think you speak for a lot of us
mostly confusion - I agree stronly, both ways
Nice one, just try to get the bullets to fly in the right direction this time, that friendly fire is deadly,its a wonder there anyone left on our side, be safer with the enemy.--------Morchuis