A fresh off the keyboard haibun.. a short haibun at that. Hope it is enjoyed! Myrna
Imaginings
Brush dipped in azure
Held by the master artist
Paints winter skies
Pastel notations of season. Dripping blue. Caressing marshmallow clouds. Fringing horizons with promise. Touching Earth with warmth. The beauty. The peace. The collaboration of crisp and clear. The aria of nature's orchestra. Such is winter on the bayou. Such is the song that sings within my soul and the memory He paints within my heart. Such is... the gift of sightless imaginings.
Great! Your haibun is better than mine, because in the first place you paid attention to the rules. Where I used senryu, you used what is supposed to be used, haiku. After the haiku you also did not make a "story" to coincide with the haiku, but rather a grouping of words to better explain what the haiku is all about.
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Myrna
glorious!
john
An exquisite composition in major art... A flower from a sublime poetic garden suffusing scent of creativity.
In respect and appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Ron
budd
Cheers moi spp,
Dan
Grade: A+ and then a bit of lagniappe.