Peace (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2004

I could imagine saying these words as a prayer after a long and exhausting day. By repating them they should bring you the peace you long for.
Excellent flow of rhythm.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

love the flow the rhtyme
and it felt so smooth
soothing thats it
very soothing........

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 7, 2004

Now this was just beautiful, very lovely and soothing,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

The point of view here makes it feel very personal, like you aren't walking away from it, but allowing the reader to get up close to it and understand the poet in a very pensive moment. Ronald, how generous to let us in and invite us to look at these very human feelings of our own. .. like stepping inside and looking around. This is lovely. katy xox.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Ron this is beyond beautiful, so uplifting and inspiring.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Ronald, Your verse is as peaceful as one could find anywhere. Sounded quite honest to the tune of personal solitude. Excellent writing. Lisa

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

True peace has herein been found...what more does one need? Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Ronald, I like the mood you convey in this splendid
poem of peace! Truly wondrous! Have a happy fourth!;-)

Reviewed by Carma Stewart (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Lovely, lovely, lovely. Will definitely click on your Peaceful Scene link above in a moment. For now, forgive me, sir, but I cannot resist the perfect opportunity for mirth... a friend of my recently emailed this to me... I do not know if it was his original reaction to something he read about the way to inner peace, or if someone else sent it to him, but I feel a dubious compulsion to pass it on to you and your readers now:

I am passing this on to you because it has definitely worked for me...and as we start summer we all could use a little calm.
By following the simple advice I read in an article, I have finally found inner peace.

"The way to achieve inner peace is to finish all the things you've started".

So I looked around the house to see all the things I started and hadn't finished.... and before leaving the house this morning I finished off a bottle of red wine, a bottle of white wine, the Bailey's, Kahlua and WildTurkey, the Prozac, some valium, some cheesecake and a box of chocolates. You have no idea how freakin good I feel....

You may pass this on to those you feel are in need of Inner Peace.

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LOL!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Ron,
This is truly the best on Peace I've read in a long time just beautiful..
Happy 4th

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Soul touching write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Deep and beautiful depth in this one Ronald!!

Love & Hugs on this special day

Your friend Tinka

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

I like the softer side of you. You always had a way with words.
Thanks for the ecard, it was fun.