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White Space
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White on White
Kazimir Malevich 1918

Museum of Modern Art, NYC

Gotta hurry and fill in this white space...


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White space is nice,
when used on the page.
Gives the eye a breather,
especially one that's aged.

White space backlights most TVs,
heightens colors with great ease.
Don't look for it if you please,
causes cross eye disease.

White space is authors' greatest fear,
staring at pages year-to-year.
Without a word to put down,
afraid to be revealed the clown.

White space can fog the view,
flying or driving becomes brand-new.
And if you dare to speed into,
a big crash up will come to you.

White space is the blizzard's fare,
blocking the view from here to there.
Erasing evidence of where you've been,
you may never come back again.

White space between the blue sky,
Antarctica is peaceful to fly by.
But white can be deadly on the ground,
when the wind howls and the sun goes down.

White space is created by whiteout,
after a few sniffs, scream and shout.
Used to think it helped writing,
addicts will tell you it is quite frightening.

There is no white space in outer space,
and it's not that night just knows its place.
Without atmosphere, white doesn't exist,
while white stars shine on with bliss.

Why are blanks shown as white?
Aren't they neutral in any light?
So if you shoot blanks from your writers' gun,
what color your victim in the setting sun?

Copyright 2011 © Ronald W. Hull

1/15/11
 

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 Reviews of "White Space"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 22, 2011
Very clever write. Well done.

Reviewed on January 21, 2011
Ron,

Hilarious, and so well thought out! Thanks for the laugh.

Mary

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on January 17, 2011
Good "Etude" on the "fill in the blanks" in art. Hard to do in writing; painting it is classic and you can do it in music, but it takes a bold composer/performer. I am using it more and more in my compositions these days - it is called: "enclosed silence" -
Mahler loved it... Take care, Mike

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 17, 2011
Cleverly done Ron! Some white space can be nice, while others (like a writers empty page) can be scary;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 16, 2011
clever ... stimulates the white as well as gray spaces ...

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 16, 2011
A perspective to ponder anew is white space Ron. The blank page, an opportunity to create without bias or preconceptions. The perfect birth place for untested ideas. With the first stroke of the pen is the dye of a complete concept set? White space is so appropriate in that white is the absence of all color. Blank? A good thought motivator is your poem. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 16, 2011
Now just how many times did Captain Kirk escape the bad guys by ducking into a white(ish) nebular cloud bank? Like your riddle. Depends, facing towards or away from the sun? Patrick

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on January 16, 2011
Clear.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 16, 2011
But can you get white out in the dark or would that be called black out...e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 16, 2011
Cleverly concocted, Ronald; and your verses do awaken the thinking process. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on January 16, 2011
I've never thought of white space like this before! A masterful pen with a twist of humor!


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