White space is nice,
when used on the page.
Gives the eye a breather,
especially one that's aged.
White space backlights most TVs,
heightens colors with great ease.
Don't look for it if you please,
causes cross eye disease.
White space is authors' greatest fear,
staring at pages year-to-year.
Without a word to put down,
afraid to be revealed the clown.
White space can fog the view,
flying or driving becomes brand-new.
And if you dare to speed into,
a big crash up will come to you.
White space is the blizzard's fare,
blocking the view from here to there.
Erasing evidence of where you've been,
you may never come back again.
White space between the blue sky,
Antarctica is peaceful to fly by.
But white can be deadly on the ground,
when the wind howls and the sun goes down.
White space is created by whiteout,
after a few sniffs, scream and shout.
Used to think it helped writing,
addicts will tell you it is quite frightening.
There is no white space in outer space,
and it's not that night just knows its place.
Without atmosphere, white doesn't exist,
while white stars shine on with bliss.
Why are blanks shown as white?
Aren't they neutral in any light?
So if you shoot blanks from your writers' gun,
what color your victim in the setting sun?
Good "Etude" on the "fill in the blanks" in art. Hard to do in writing; painting it is classic and you can do it in music, but it takes a bold composer/performer. I am using it more and more in my compositions these days - it is called: "enclosed silence" -
Mahler loved it... Take care, Mike
A perspective to ponder anew is white space Ron. The blank page, an opportunity to create without bias or preconceptions. The perfect birth place for untested ideas. With the first stroke of the pen is the dye of a complete concept set? White space is so appropriate in that white is the absence of all color. Blank? A good thought motivator is your poem. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Now just how many times did Captain Kirk escape the bad guys by ducking into a white(ish) nebular cloud bank? Like your riddle. Depends, facing towards or away from the sun? Patrick
Blod Ties - Fantasy, Romance. Romantasy? A bit of whimsy for the weekend. A naive British tourist John Gormley takes a holiday in the ancient, remote kingdom of Perarboria. He does not suspect that his holiday love affair with a local beauty is desti
Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.
Hilarious, and so well thought out! Thanks for the laugh.
Mary
Mahler loved it... Take care, Mike
Love,
Eileen
Regis