Clean Page (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 6, 2015

"Time to start over with a clean slate."
Well said, Ron!
A well done poem too!
Thank s for sharing!

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 2, 2015

Exactly, and only You can do it...stop and smell the roses
and find the Real You. An excellent write, Ron!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on July 25, 2015

When my life seemed to go down the drain. I stopped, thought things through, made a plan and started a new page in my life. Good advice here and a good way of thinking.
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Susan Smith

Reviewed on July 24, 2015

Written with rhythm, it vibrates with the yearning of the soul to start over again with a clean slate.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 24, 2015

Very uplifting and hope-filled verses, Ron. I appreciate the philosophy of the new, white, clean page. Your metaphorical offering works for me. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 22, 2015

EXCELLENT, Ron. One of your very best. Kudos - so well done and expressed. xx

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 21, 2015

Ron,

I enjoyed this insightful poem. A clean page..a new day. Love it.

Love and blessings,
Linda

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2015

Sage Advice and oddly enough, I thought of our pal Matlack when I read this, and scanning the comments below, I see that he obviously did too.

Reviewed by G. Roscoe (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2015

What a truthful poem Ronald. Silly mood swings and saccharine lies,
wasting time while precious time flies.

I agree, how many minutes do it take the spirit to leave the body and never return? Yep, time out for the non-sense.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

Uplifting and inspiring! Thank you Ron!

Sandie

Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

Beautifully done. We do write our own story, even when we don't know it. Each day CAN be a fresh start.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

Ron I think I may have needed this poem. I've never read greater wisdom, a new page can be a wonderful thing to start. Thank you.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

Uplifting poetry.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on July 19, 2015

~Ron~
With the wisdom of sage. Refreshing poetry.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Dadfire

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

Great message Ron. Life puts so many weights upon us that sometimes we go through life like an old car with mud inside the wheel rims. Some of the mud finally gets thrown off but then dang, we hit another mudhole.
We just have to be able to make it to the car wash.

Dan F.

Reviewed by Larry Matthews

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

Good write Ron. If only it were that simple. When others depend on you it gets a little more complicated. My brother figured it out his last words to me were I love you Luke with all my heart. The next morning they found him hanging from a tree but he was free.

Reviewed by Eva Pasco

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

I, for one, am always reinventing myself out of necessity or whim. To preserve my own sanity I look at the dawn of each day as a clean white page to begin anew.

Your poetic words of wisdom should be embroidered, framed, and hung on a therapist's wall.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

You are so right and this is such a refreshing piece you have offered here! Hooray!!! I'm lovin' it!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by June Marshall

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

This about sums up everyone's life, the past is the past, the future has yet to be and only the present is now. We seem to put off until tomorrow, a lot, but maybe there might not be a tomorrow for everyone. Thanks for the reminder friend.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

Truth be told, as you proffer here, only we humans determined to stay immersed in our habits. Habits are not innate, they are learned. So, in order to start anything anew, we usually have to unlearn. Oh, the number of unlearned habits we take to the grave or urn. Sadly, few people will lift their couch-potato mentality up and move some new blood around.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

Shaped by life,
we are what we are,
but it's up to us,
to light our own star.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Miller Caldwell

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

Ronald

I think you need to gov this to a musical agent. I am sure it would be popular.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

Eh . . . Although you never came right out and said it, it's never to late to start over. I think I'm my own guy, and my thoughts are my own thoughts. Still, we are all tempered and affected by what goes on around us and how we react to the same. I started over in October 2010. Sometimes I find myself slipping back into the person I used to be, but quickly and decisively, leave it behind . . . Hopefully to be buried forever.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 18, 2015

You wrote this for me, didn't you, c'mon fess up...I liked it though with me it will never happen, wish it could, but...great one, Ron...-e-