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Broken Bones - Haiku
by Joy Marsh → (All Poetry by Joy Marsh)
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 a dozen soldier's
metal rain collides with sweat
dreadful precision


 

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 Reviews of "Broken Bones - Haiku"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
Oooh, right on target. Strong and to the point. Powerful. The brevity of this poetic form adds to the abruptness of the death. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Joy, I don't like wars, period. Such a waste of life. How I long for the day when we can all live together in peace and harmony.

Lena

Reviewed by Susan Bailey
Reviewed on May 5, 2007
I enjoy Haiku. So much can be said with so few words as you have done here. Well done.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
The side effects of war! So sad.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
War is so sad and you've penned this sadness with emotion and imagination. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed on May 4, 2007
So true. Sad! Very well done!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Tragic price. Very descriptive..

Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Joy,

Too many broken bones and shattered lives: a terrible cost to pay for our freedom: our brave men and women in uniform have my respect and gratitude. Well penned sadness.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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