You summed it up perfectly. My solution was to turn the alarm off. However the dog licks my face and the day starts anyway.
Pity you can not join me on a Wednesday night at Kirkpatrick Durham Village Hall, Dumfries & Galloway, Scotland on a Wednesday night to play over 50s badminton. I always get a good nights sleep after that!
Keep writing
Miller
www.millercaldwell.org
i know the feeling and trying so hard only makes it worse. Best to get up have a glass of warm milk and listen to the radio. Then try again later when... the dawn is just on the horizon!! :)
This is true of many writers, I suspect. You need to do something about this stanza:
A gift of beauty, when thoughts do flow;
But as of late it has been slow...
Maybe "A gift of beauty, thoughs ebb and flow" or something similar. Otherwise, it's obvious that you've inverted the line to get the rhyme word at the end. That's a no no.
This is so real and true to life. I can totally relate, having experienced it many times and you have expressed it so well in poetic form. Thank you for this offering, Catherine. Love and peace, Regis.
i hate that, when i can't sleep! very annoying, that! and my ol' achy breaky arthritic joints don't help matters! :( cute write! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))
New Poetry by Catherine M MacDonald-- Spiritual Psychic Medium
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You summed it up perfectly. My solution was to turn the alarm off. However the dog licks my face and the day starts anyway.
Pity you can not join me on a Wednesday night at Kirkpatrick Durham Village Hall, Dumfries & Galloway, Scotland on a Wednesday night to play over 50s badminton. I always get a good nights sleep after that!
Keep writing
Miller
www.millercaldwell.org
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Officer William Heffner
A gift of beauty, when thoughts do flow;
But as of late it has been slow...
Maybe "A gift of beauty, thoughs ebb and flow" or something similar. Otherwise, it's obvious that you've inverted the line to get the rhyme word at the end. That's a no no.