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Insanity
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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I really am doing okay right now, but yes I am trying to let you know how it feels in my mind sometimes. Not to worry...

 

 
Insanity
 
 
Looking back on yesterday
Thought I had just hummed along
Only to find my memories
Entombed in an eerie fog
Where is reality lurking
In this brain so tricked and murky
Very little has any meaning
With a mind so crazy and screaming
Can you reach me here in hell, Lord?

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 Reviews of "Insanity"
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on May 27, 2009
I see this as the description
of being trapped in one's mind.
In a way, we are all prisoners
of our mind.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on May 21, 2009
He's probably in there holding you up right now, Liz, making sure you survive it. This is a powerful question. Keep your heart open to the help....Jerry

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 20, 2009
Great poem Liz. I believe we are all just a shade away from insanity. Not all of us receive the trigger that sends us over the brink. There's a history of depression and emotional problems in my Dad's side of the family, so I found your words to be very profound.

Anna

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
"Can you reach me here in hell, Lord?" That line was very powerful and touching. A very touching and wonderful write.

Reviewed by Milton Handfield
Reviewed on May 9, 2009
It's an alarming reality that everyone's mind is not contented. For this reason we should show compassion for one another.

Blessings. Milton Handfield

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
Do I ever know the feeling!! Shouldn't waste precious time on regrets, but reality does love to lurk, doesn't it. My brain, too,
becomes "tricked and murky." Hard to write autobiography because
memories do not stay in sequence. . .especially bad ones. Anywaaaaay, thank you for writing and sharing this. May the memories you will have of today, and all future days, be in the main happy ones. And go easy on yourself! Lovin' Hugs, 'Pea'

Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk
Reviewed on May 1, 2009
I enjoyed this poem, Well done,
Mariann

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
traumatised pasts can steal our living moments of the now, seeming to keep us bound when the memory of them recurs. But now IS actually all we have, however much we may worry and anticipate the future or ruminate on what has been. The continuous present seems an impossible pinnacle to inhabit and cling to at times, but I think it is a most freeing place if we can learn to transform it moment by moment into the plateau of our on-going experience. Many can relate to shades of your feelings expressed here, Liz, to a greater or lesser degree. I am glad that you are in a good place right now and long may it continue! Wherever you are and whenever, there is most certainly One who will weather it with you... Kate xx

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on April 11, 2009
I have heard much about pain and suffering this Holy Week.
It is normal for Christians to go through pain and suffering.
We are blessed in the mist of all the stress.
Prayers go upand the blessings come down.
Amen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 5, 2009
I get an overall zombie-like feeling here. These type of days on end must be so scary for you. As always, stay strong. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on April 1, 2009
Fantastic poem,great work,thank you for sharing this,take care

Edwin

Reviewed on March 30, 2009
. . . a remarkable write - splendid!

Lance

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
So glad to hear you are ok sweet lady...I know how you feel I'm like that a lot these days..stress makes me SCREAMMMM...keep smiling and remember you are not alone....stay safe and well..OK... Hugss,much love too you...

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 30, 2009
Your poem comes alive through your plea at the end...
Cryssa

Reviewed on March 29, 2009
We all question our sanity, Elizabeth, some more than others - powerfully, achingly penned (and felt, especially as of late) - well done. You are in my prayers.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Where is reality lurking,
In this brain so tricked and murky

I think many of us can relate, Elizabeth.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 29, 2009
Elizabeth,
This is a question each of us asks at some time and the answer or answers may not come easily or at all. Good to hear you are doing well.
John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
Sorry to hear you have to feel this way Elizabeth but yes the Lord is with us at all times where ever we are dear. Be strong and follow your heart to reality.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
I can feel every bit of your pain, Liz, but have no fear that the Lord can always reach you, even in the depths of despair. Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
This is very compelling and meaningful, Elizabeth. I know it may sound "trite" but I often wonder the same myself. Thank you. Love, peace, strength, and my very best to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 28, 2009
Well I have made that journey in the last few years more than once and so far have found the light and the strength to find my way out of the dark...I guess sometimes my own fear is that I won't always find my way back...

hugs
fee


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