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No Outlet
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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STuff just keeps happening...

 

No Outlet
 
 
Stagnant waters run deep
No outlet, debris collects for keeps
Dog digs into the neighbor’s yard
Lab work bad, more to be drawn
Babies are crying
Daughter takes off the rings
Wedding bells cracked and the pain stings
Dog chained, can’t dig at all
Safe until the bigger bricks are installed
Babies are happier, all adjusting
Lab work still bad, even more to be drawn
Questions unanswered until the next dawn
Pain downward spiraling
No outlet immobilizing
So just keep trying
 
 

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 Reviews of "No Outlet"
Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on February 10, 2010
How did I miss reading this before. powerful and deep.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
Better days are ahead for you Liz...just
keep on trying and remember prayer changes
everything...Blessings upon you and your family!



Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
Speedbumps my friend........blips on the radar.......I love your style Liz and I send you peace and love from North Alabama.
Bill :-)

Reviewed on October 5, 2009
a spiral whirlwind of emotional feelings are here
may the light of love's breadth emit some goodness
and embrace you all...and that is one bad bad puppy...
I use a buggy whip to impliment obedience to mine.
The buggy whip reaches far & cracks a sting & makes a
sound they will adhere to once snapped. My one pup
tried diggin the fence by my neighbor & wack!
he hasn't done it since...of course I also said "No Dig"
as I cracked his behind :)
get a whip at a farmers fleet store :)
Good Luck Liz....
Love & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on September 29, 2009
Hang in there, Liz. Internalize that just keep trying, and seek for faith. You are a beautiful person as your writing shows........Jerry

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on September 28, 2009
It is all about continuing to move forward...at some point the light will shine again.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on September 27, 2009
The depth of pain is palpable, so very emotive and sad, Liz ~Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 26, 2009
Sounds overwhelming, Liz. Thank you for sharing this personal write. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 25, 2009
The last verse of your write is a key, Liz. I do like that flicker of hope that never goes out. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 25, 2009
Lis
It's endless and painful this journey, this life experience and you capture that all too true. Well written!

John

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on September 25, 2009
Keep hope alive my dear, and someday soon, all will be well.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 25, 2009
A brutally and honest write that reads like a journal entry of a tormented soul just trying to make ends meet till the sun comes out someday...and it will.
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 25, 2009
So just keep trying

Sometimes, that's about all we can do. Hope better days are ahead.


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