African Blood Feud
Eetwidomayloh
(He Who Greets With Fire)
Northern Botswana, Africa’s gut, wild still,
Acacia laced veldt, plain and rolling hill,
Home of elephant, zebra and wildebeest,
Blood feud north, south, west and east,
Hyenas and lions compete for same food,
Clan and pride subject to opportunist mood
Of the other, beyond mere competitive hate,
Yet each species entwines in other’s fate.
Each robs kill if combat strength over-match,
Kill other’s stragglers if they find and catch.
Eemaydah and Eetwidomayloh share a pride,
Eemaydah slightly older, his emotions can hide,
Eetwidomayloh, male lion prime, blood hot,
Rippling hard muscle, explores range in trot.
Eemaydah, pride’s boundaries also must mark,
So while males go on their cruising lark,
Hyena clan’s numbers gather in strength,
Harass pride’s females, go to any length,
To scavenge their kills, overpower them if alone,
Chase them up trees, aware males are gone.
Eemaydah returns, clan matriarch unaware,
Overpowers, breaks her back without a care.
New matriarch assumes command of clan,
On spiteful mission launches daring plan,
Taunt Eemaydah, disdainfully mark his spoor,
She traces his path, covers his scent on tour.
Lion king is watchful of haughty indiscretion,
Content to attend standoff with siege session.
But now comes Eetwidomayloh, sees this sight,
Lions humbled, insulted. Ears back, into flight,
Straight for matriarch, from nearby viewing post,
Six hundred pound frame rippling to the most,
Black mane waves air, each veldt eating bound,
Tail behind juggernaut, for balance swings ‘round.
Anger on face, palpably awful, vivid and large,
Too late, matriarch sees all out raging charge,
She turns on a whimper, rude plan now forgot,
Races for her life, survival hope, her only plot.
She dodges, he counters, she stretches, he gains.
She runs, eyes back, as their separation wanes,
He gauges leaps ‘til her stride match he’s found,
Huge paw stretches, claws bared, curve around,
Hooks her hind foot, she trips, quickly trapped,
On her last heartbeat, her thick neck snapped,
Great grinding crunch — dealing satisfied scorn,
Death of short career, clan’s nightmare is born.
Eetwidomayloh, supreme killer, feline sire,
Greets loathed enemies with searing fire.
Vengeance roams veldt, new purpose keen,
Find hyena clan, remove from the scene.
We don’t know how far his vendetta went,
If Eetwidomayloh’s life has been spent,
But hyenas’re still there, yipping with fright,
As huge lion — or ghost — haunts their night.
For a start, I am appalled at what I wrote. I remade my account here, so that I could come here again for the sole purpose of apologising. Though the spotted hyena is still very much my favourite animal, I have grown a lot since then, and now I am truly ashamed at my behaviour. Will you please forgive me?
I re-read the poem, and as most of the other users here have pointed out, it is very gripping and though I have seen the documentary many times, it still had me on edge through to the brutal climax.
As for Judas, though I can see that your knowledge on the spotted hyena is superficial at best and that I could devote a whole page on lecturing you, I will refrain from doing so. You were right, this is after all an appreciation page for authors.
Again, I can't apologise enough.
I do not consider him a noble lion king, I consider him to be nothing more than a big bully.
The hyenas showed true bravery when defending their cubs and fighting the lionesses.
I hope the hyenas kill Eetwidomayloh one day.
life.
Greetings.
CHARLIE
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
Best wishes always
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~Jackie~
You were so close to me in this write...lol!!
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Reindeer
enjoyed reading much
excellent
William
In Spirit,
Bear
o, this is breathtaking in scope--definately a keeper
i have always wanted to go to africa...and you took me there, if only in spirit, in this dramatic tale--i could feel, taste, see, SMELL africa
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) *thank you*
This is great!!!
Thank you